This is another independent story
Let me Preface by saying that this is not related to any of my other stories. I had one of the forum Goddesses edit it for me, she's just handy like that and I want to thank her for her diligent and hard work.... GREAT GOOGAMOOGA there were plenty of errors there is probably still one or two there. I did my best on it and I never really asked her to proof read for me I just wanted her opinion so thanks again to her. Now that that is out of the way gentle readers please enjoy this tale, please once you have finished visit the stories forum and look around and see if you can vote for it... or maybe one of my capable colleges stories will catch your fancy. Thank you enjoy.

I met Ellen at a party, and that’s really how it all started. It was a Saturday night and my friend had invited me over to his house for a party I had been there maybe a dozen or so times and this was a big one, at least by his standards with about fifty people. He lived in a house that was built in the fifties, located in an older part of town, all pier and beam construction. Most of everyone was out in the back, where the kegs were, I helped myself to a cup of the cold amber stuff. Surveying the scene I saw he had a bar-b-q going and I got a plate of food and looked to find a place to sit down and eat.

I found myself walking back into the house and I pushed open one of the doors to a sitting room where I knew there was a couch and the bathroom was easily accessible there as well. I walked in on two women sitting on the couch talking.

“I’m sorry I didn’t mean to interrupt,” I said and started to back out of the room.

“No, don’t go you tall glass of water you,” the older of the two said, though in my book she looked pretty good. “You’re just in time to settle an argument”

She patted the couch between them and I awkwardly sat down. I took a sip from my beverage and “So do you have a big cock?”

I almost choked at the question, I had beer running out my nose and tears in my eyes I coughed a few times and tried to catch my breath. “I’m sorry what?”

“Do you have a big dick?”

“I don’t know I guess.”

“He guesses it’s big,” the older woman said to the other. “Quite the modest young man.”

“I bet it’s as big as my pinky,” the younger said.

“Oh, do you now. And what are you putting on the table?”

“Hmm,” the younger woman thought for a minute. “I bet my top.”

“I’ll see that bet and I’ll bet I can at least get a fistful of cock.”


“Yes, I’ll bet everything but my panties.”

“If he’s bigger than a fist full then I’ll get on my knees and make you cum right here in this room.”

“If he’s bigger than a fist and two fingers,” she held up the two, “then I’ll eat you and then let you jerk him
off onto my face, and I’ll wear it the rest of the evening.”

“Bullshit!” the younger woman said.

“Well then raise the bet.”

“If he’s bigger than a fist and three fingers I’ll eat you out and let him give me a facial topless and I’ll stay that way till I get home.”

“Oh if he’s bigger than two fists I’ll let him fuck me while I eat you.”

“If he’s bigger than two fists I’ll bend over right now and he can fuck me.”

“You didn’t raise the bet,” the older woman said.

She turned to me and opened my pants and pulled my cock out. It was already hot in there and this betting game had really gotten me going. She put one hand around my cock and the other girl put her hand on top of that. She older woman leaned forward and took the head of my dick in her mouth, as the two women squeezed it a glob of precum oozed out and the older woman slurped it up.

The younger woman stood and then hesitated a moment. “Do you have a condom?”

“Condom,” the older woman retorted, “There was nothing mentioned about condoms in the bet.”

“Oh I…”

“Pull them down Emmy,” the older woman said.

As she stood up beside Emmy, Emmy bent over and pulled down her shorts and panties in one swift move as the older woman helped me up and got behind me and quite deftly guided my cock to Emmy’s slick slot. Emmy moaned as I pushed forward, she pushed back against me.

“Please don’t cum in me,” Emmy said looking back the woman behind me bumped her hips into mine and it almost forced Emmy face down into the couch.

The woman slid her fingers lightly under my shirt, and started gently tweaking my nipples as I found a rhythm that was agreeable to me.

“Cum in my slut friend.” the woman whispered in my ear, “Make her slosh with your baby juice,” she breathed as she suckled my earlobe and tweaked my nipples.

I don’t know exactly what it was, all the stimulation or what but I was very quickly pounding the Emmy’s pussy and I could feel my balls boiling up. A few seconds later my cock was spraying the inside of Emmy’s love canal the other woman held on to Emmy’s hips holding us in place, Emmy went wild when she felt my hot cream exploding inside her and finally the woman let go and Emmy slumped on the couch face first.

The woman smiled at me and handed me a business card. “Emmy was just married last week, she has been trying to get knocked up by her husband,” she smiled evilly. “Call me later,” she kissed me lightly on the cheek and exited the room.

I pulled up my pants, and collected my plate and beer and followed. I didn’t see the woman again and it wasn’t until the next day that a looked at the card. Ellen Ellis, it read and there was a phone number. I washed my face and brushed my teeth and went out and worked my little side business doing computer repairs around the neighborhood. I came home with a fist full of dollars and sat down to a cold Tecate, a little salt and lime and a microwave burrito. I stared at the card that I left on the kitchen table while I chewed and slowly emptied the beer. I picked up my cell and a few minutes later the phone was ringing.

“This is Ellen,” the voice said.

“Hi Ellen, I’m Jake from last night.”

“I don’t recall meeting a Jake.”

“Well, you didn’t really give me a chance to introduce myself, you watched me fuck your friend Emma, I think it was.”

There was almost a tangible grin on the other end of the phone, “Yes Jake, why don’t you come over, I’ll make you something to eat and we can chat.”

“Chat, um okay, I already ate?”

“Something light then,” Ellen said and she gave me directions.

Twenty minutes later I stepped up to a fairly well-appointed house. The house was sort of a grayish brick, modest yet tastefully decorated, I knocked on the door. It opened as I was surveying the landscaping which seemed to be lacking to a degree. A young girl opened the door, “Hello,” I said. “Is Ellen home?”

“MOMm,” the Girl yelled. “Some guy at the door for you.”

Ellen appeared a few moments later dressed in a coal colored pleated skirt and a tank top, she led me into the living room and had me sit on the couch, as she walked to the kitchen, which was just through an archway. She returned a few seconds later with a tray of crackers and an assortment of cheese, and meat.

“You met Amanda I see,” she said as she set the tray down.

“Yes, quite charming,” I said, to which Ellen rolled her eyes. I grinned at her.

“So do you have a girlfriend?” she asked.

“Uh, no. Living with my parents really kind of puts a kybosh on the whole girlfriend deal, they ask me where I live and when I tell them with my parents, loser apparently flashes in front of their eyes.”

Ellen’s laugh was musical. She got up and went into the kitchen for a minute and returned with two salads dressed in sort of bacon vinaigrette. It tasted wonderful and I scarfed it down like I hadn’t eaten anything in a week. She smiled and ate as she watched me make the salad disappear. She then presented wine glasses with a dark red wine in them.

“You know I’m only twenty,” I said.

“That’s okay a little wine won’t hurt besides I seem to remember you drinking a beer at the party.”

“Touché,” I laughed.

“I have an offer for you,” she said, “but you have to be willing to amuse me.”

“Oh what do you have in mind?”

“You could move in here with me and my daughter. I have a spare room, say two hundred a month maybe three to cover groceries and the like.”

“What about your husband?”

“He died in an Oil field explosion ten years ago.”

“I see. I’m sorry.”

“Nothing to be sorry about it happened I don’t think about it much anymore.”

“So three hundred a month? Isn’t that kind of … cheap?”

“Yes, there is a catch. You have to do some things for me.”


“Oh little things like fuck who ever I tell you to, and do it so I can… …Observe shall we say?”

“You want to watch?”

“Sometimes, sometimes I might want to partake as well.”

“Okay, and….?”

“And if you do that you can not only fuck me anytime you want you can… ask me to do things whatever strikes your fancy,” she grinned wickedly.


“And you can’t touch my daughter… I doubt you would want to… she is still going through that awkward stage.”

“What about girlfriends?”

“Bring them over fuck them to your heart’s content.”

“Really, you wouldn’t be like jealous or anything?”

Ellen smiled. “I like to watch, the kinkier it is the more I like it.”

“So I could bring a girl over and fuck her and then right after she leaves…”

“I’ll suck your eyeballs through your cock,” she shrugged and one sleeve of the tank top dropped half revealing her smallish breasts.

“Okay” I said sipping the wine she handed me a cracker sandwich and I savored the contrast of flavors as she sidled up beside me. “Um, just wondering what about Emma?”

“Oh Emily she is one of my good friends… she will be around, I’ll bring all sorts of women around for you to sample.”

“Um, why?”

“Because silly boy, you’re young you need to fuck as many girls as you can and get it out of your system, otherwise later…” she let the tank top drop and I could see her reddish capped breasts, the nipples were long and hard and surrounded by a ring of red flesh about the size of a beer bottle.

“What I asked,” she had finished saying something.

She laughed, “I said otherwise you will cheat on the right girl.”

“How do you know you aren’t the right girl?”

She laughed, “I’m only in this for my own personal pleasure… what I’m giving you is sort of a gift.”

She stood and took me by the hand and led me back into her bedroom. She closed the door and locked it, turning she shed her skirt and my pants in what seemed like the same movement. I felt the her warm breath as her lips enveloped my cock and she easily slurped half of my cock into her mouth before she looked up at me. Her brown eyes sparkled at me as she inhaled the other half of my cock. My knees were weak as I felt her throat contracting around my cock and after what must have been a minute or two but felt like forever. She released my cock from her wonderful mouth and pulled me onto the bed.

Ellen pushed me down and straddled my hips her hands deftly guiding my cock into her sweet wet snatch. She started first by just rubbing the tip of my cock against the swollen lips of her pussy, the feeling was wonderful and I found myself thrusting up to try and get inside of that sweet honey pie. When she finally lowered herself onto my hips it was like I was sliding into a tub of warm butter, she rested there impaled on my cock for some time, and then I could feel her muscles start flexing and contracting around me.

I was delirious with the pleasure this woman was giving to me. She still didn’t move and I reached up and squeezed her breasts with my hands. She pulled her tank top off to reveal her small breasts capped with large juicy nipples. I leaned forward to take on in my mouth and when I did she started to flex her hips grinding and riding up and down my cock. It wasn’t long before I was spurting hot cream into her wonderful magical pussy. She didn’t stop she just kept riding and through some trick that she had she kept me hard and kept me from shrinking. I am not sure how many times I coated the inside of her snatch with cream but it was more than three, and her thrashing and moaning and her own orgasms were not only spectacular to feel but incredible to watch.

I woke up it was getting dark out and she gave me a cup of hot chocolate before I got out of bed, I drove home to tell my parents the news, they took it pretty well, and it took about a week for me to get everything that was mine moved over to Ellen’s house.

I still got up around ten to go and do the odd jobs that I normally did for money. When I got up, there was a plate on the counter, and a note. I ate the food on the plate, a cheese omelet and some bacon and the coffee in the coffee maker warmed up nicely in the microwave. I read the note;

My friend Melissa is having problems with her computer, call her and see if you can help her. Call me first though please!

I picked up my cell and called Ellen, she explained that Melissa was kind of a shut in and very conscious about her weight. She wanted to see if I could turn her into an out and out slut, and have her begging to get my cock. That seemed a little odd to me but she said that if I would open her Instant messenger and let her watch over Melissa’s web cam, I packed up my things and called Melissa next.

I was at her door half an hour later. Melissa was dressed in sweats and she was about five feet tall and was one of the more Rubenesque women I had ever been in close proximity too. She led me to her computer, which was in her bedroom. She asked if I needed anything and I said a drink would be nice as I went to work on her computer. It took me all of about thirty minutes to fix it, and Melissa was sitting on her bed watching me as I did it. I turned on her web cam in a moment when she went out of the room and to the bathroom.

“Jake?” Melissa began. “Are you like dating anyone right now?”

“No, not really”

“Oh um…” she lowered her head and seemed to be looking for the proper words to say.

“I’m done here why don’t you try it out,” I told her.

She sat down and opened up a browser it immediately opened to . (which is where you should be reading this story, if you’re not let me know! Please, crackedjaguar at hotmail thanx)

“Oh I didn’t mean um…” she stammered a bit.

I reached over and took the mouse from her trembling hand. My mouth was next to her ear as I clicked in the search box and saw all the naughty things that she had searched for. I picked one at random and let the movie play.

“Do you masturbate to this?” I whispered in her ear as a chunky girl stroked two guys’ cocks.

“Uh… uhuh” she whimpered.

“Put your hands on the desk,” she hesitantly lifted her hands and put them on the desk. “Watch.”
I had picked a long movie reading the time code in advance and so after a few seconds of buffer the movie played without interruption. I brushed her hair away from her neck and lightly began to kiss her neck slowly working up and down the side pausing to nibble her earlobe. She shivered and trembled while I kept an eye on her hands, when they lifted from the desk.

“Keep your hands on the desk Melissa, if you take them off the desk, that means it is time for me to leave.”

I could see her biting her lip in nervous frustration and she set them back on the desk.  I went back to kissing her neck pulling her shoulder length brown hair away as I licked up and down the back of her neck. Her hands were balled in fists now. I slipped a hand under her sweat top and cupped one of her enormous breasts.

“Do you want me to take your shirt off?” I whispered as I suckled her earlobe.

“Mmmm yes… please.”

She helped me remove the sweatshirt revealing what can only be described as an industrial bra. When her hands moved back to the desk I leaned over and dragged my lips across her neck. I lightly bit and teased her neck for a while, while she watched the screen and I let my hands slide around her body and cup her breasts. She moaned when I exposed one of her breasts, pulling it from its confining restraint and rolled her nipple between my fingers. My other hand slid down and she leaned back and pushed her hips forward as my hand slipped under the waistband of her sweat pants. My fingers searched through the swampy thicket of hair until I found the familiar cleft between her legs as I slipped my fingers up and down the length of her slit I pulled her hair to one side and nipped and sucked at her exposed neck.
She let out a long low moan as my fingertip tickled and circled her swollen clit. I kept on occasionally biting her neck as her body flushed and she began to tremble.

“Cumming” she gasped as her entire body spasmed in ecstasy. “Stop,” she gasped.

“If I stop then I’m leaving,” I whispered in her ear.

“No don’t go,” her hips bucking to evade my fingers which were lightly rubbing her excited clit.

“When I say cum I want you to cum for me,” I smiled up at the camera as I bit her neck.

“Yes” she whimpered. I started teasing and rubbing her clit harder, faster and as she was already on a hair trigger she groaned “Oh god,” her hips bucked against my hand as she thrashed through another orgasm.

“Not yet!”

“I’m sorry, I didn’t I couldn’t help it,” she said as I pulled away.

“I don’t know Melissa, you can’t follow my instructions.”

“Please…” she whimpered. “Anything… I’ll make it up to you.”

“Okay, but you have to do exactly what I tell you.”

“Yes,” Melissa replied.

“Good.” I reached over and turned off the movie.

“Get undressed.”

“Yes sir,” she said, her voice filled with all kinds of hope.

“Get on the end of your bed.” I stood next to the computer looking down at as she sat at the end of the bed. “Put your legs up so I can have a good view of your pussy Melissa.”

She hesitantly pulled her legs up and sat on the edge of the bed with her feet on either side of her ass. Her pussy was covered with a dark thicket of fur that seemed to have gone wild and was climbing her generous stomach and the insides of her thighs.

“Now I want you to stay like that and masturbate for me,” I told her

Slowly, she lowered one hand down towards her steaming gash and she looked up at me for a second before dropping her eyes to what she was about to do. She slowly stroked the outside of her pussy, the wet hairs matted and clinging to her fingers.

“Faster,” I said. She started moving her hand faster I walked up to her and said, “Don’t stop until you cum and don’t cum until I tell you.”

A strangled affirmative was about all she could manage around her heavy breathing. I took one of her magnificent mammary in my hands and her eyes tracked as I brought the mammoth breast to my lips. I took the nipple between my lips and pulled at it with my teeth, then let my teeth drag on it until it popped free. Melissa groaned as I repeated this, her groans getting more and more urgent with each passing moment. I sucked her nipple enjoying the texture and feeling of the wonderful nipple in my mouth. I squeezed her nipple between my fingers and leaned over and whispered into her ear… “Cum.”

She did as she fell back on the bed and thrashed for several moment her fingers apparently on autopilot as they thrust into her sopping we slit. She lay there on her bed her eyes closed gasping. I wrote a note on a pad of paper,

Melissa, I will call you tomorrow; please clean up your pussy.

I turned off the camera and walked out the door locking it behind me. I drove back home and took a quick shower before heading out again to actually do some real work. I came back home with a few hundred dollars in my pocket and was greeted by Ellen at the door.

“That was fucking awesome,” she said. As I sat on the couch she handed me a cold Negra Modelo. I sipped at it as she continued her interrogation, “Did you fuck her?”

“No,” I said. “Not yet.”

Ellen smirked back at me, “Ooh, you are a naughty one and with some self-control, too.”

“Thanks,” I said and tipped the beer back again.

“I told her to clean up…” I dropped off when Amanda walked into the room.

“What are you guys talking about?” she asked.

“Nothing that concerns you,” Ellen retorted.

“You were talking about fucking weren’t you? I want to hear about it”

“Young lady you will mind your own business and not listen in on adult’s private conversations.”

Ellen got up there was a fire in her eyes and she grabbed Amanda by the arm and dragged her out of the room. I sipped my beer and couldn’t help but hear the screaming going on in the back of the house, and then about five loud smacks.

Ellen returned a few minutes later. “I’m sorry about that,” she said. “Young and eager, I just hope I can keep her from getting knocked up before she gets out of school..”

I shrugged and sipped my beer.

“So you just left her on the bed like that no..”

“No, I left a note I told her to clean up her pussy.”

“Hmmm…” Ellen said she might take that the wrong way. “I mean I presume you meant she should trim it down to something more manageable than that jungle she has between her legs.”


“She might think that you think she… is stinky down there,” Ellen gestured.

“I hadn’t thought of that,” I responded. “Though I did tell her I would call her tomorrow”

“Well, that part is promising, at least.”

We ate dinner with a very angry Amanda and I went to sleep shortly thereafter. It had been a long day after all. I’d been in bed maybe ten minutes when there was a tapping at my door, a few seconds later it opened and Ellen walked in wearing a robe, and she quickly turned and closed the door.

“I didn’t thank you properly for today’s show,” she said as she pulled the covers back and peeled off my underwear.

Her mouth was hot and wonderful when she slipped it around my cock and it was only seconds before I went from semi to rigid. She straddled me quickly and leaned her body over mine her nipples just grazing my face as she rocked up and down on my cock. I sucked and pulled on them with my teeth as she picked up her tempo until she was slamming her pussy down on my cock. She gasped as I felt her contracting around my cock and my own juices boiled over into her. She lay on top of me for several minutes my cock slowly sliding out of her, both of us spent.

She stood up after a little bit and I could see some of my cum leaking out of her. She apparently felt it too and she turned to me and scooped some up with her fingers and sucked them clean.

“And a snack too, I’ll talk to you tomorrow.” She turned and walked out the door, it looked as if it had been open just a crack. Had she shut it or was it just my imagination?

I drifted off to sleep.

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2011-12-07 21:01:57
Very good story, the proofing worked to keep me interested. The sex scens worked for me. horny?


2011-12-02 17:57:23
I loved your story, CJ and it was in my top 3 for the contest. Ultimately I didn't pick yours because I had a hard time with the beginning. There is no real rhyme or reason for the women to behave towards the main character the way they did and I felt the lack of motivation detracted. I could say that the motivation was for the newlywed woman to get pregnant, except that she didn't want him to make her pregnant.. unless it was a case of the lady doth protest too much.. Overall, it somewhat muddled the beginning for me, although the rest of the story flowed much more smoothly and I really enjoyed the direction you took it. I look forward to more chapters of Jake's adventures.

anonymous readerReport

2011-11-13 01:51:13
Good story. In future episodes get the women you fuck pregnant- every one of them. Get landlady's daughter pregnant too.

anonymous readerReport

2011-11-09 22:05:28
thanks jaguar your th best. also dont forget, their after us maaan the brain people!


2011-11-09 20:07:09
By the by I try and make comments on my stories as myself... don't confuse me with any of these other people... They are almost as crazy and paranoid as I am... cept I wear my tinfoil hat... :)

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