James and Ruth, having taken one another's virginity, spend an evening with their friends, introducing the two groups . . .
THE FIRST TIME COUPLE: PART 5
This is a fictitious story, which I have based on true accounts from friends, along with personal experience. This is not a hard sex story, and although it does contain graphic sexual descriptions; it is the continuation of a romantic tale, depicting the first experiences and the feelings experienced by many, many people, when confronted by sexual situations and sensations for the first time. It also contains first time sex for other characters. For those of you in the US, “fanny” is a pussy in the UK, and other words may differ. I hope you enjoy.
James awoke on Saturday morning, feeling euphoric. ‘I’m a man at long last,’ he thought. ‘Ruth is just so wonderful and I love her. I wish she was here now.’ With his hand upon his usual morning erection, he smiled. ‘I won’t be touching that anymore. I don’t need to.’ Lifting the covers, he looked down at his six inch penis, retracting his foreskin to see precum glistening. The feeling in his groin told him to take it in his hand and stimulate it, but James was strong willed. ‘Nope,’ he thought, ‘my dick is waiting for Ruth!’ he then got out of bed, checked that nobody else was around, and made his way into the shower.
Ruth lay in bed, thinking back to the evening with James. ‘He was so gentle. The feeling of his dick in me was just so magical.’ Aroused by the memory, Ruth put her hand between her legs, moving down her trimmed pubes and softly rubbing her brown floppy lips and inserting a finger into her moist tunnel. ‘It feels nice, but it isn’t the same. I want James in me.’ Removing her hand, Ruth lay back and closed her eyes. ‘We’re out with the group tonight, so making love with James won’t be easy. Maybe we can stop off somewhere.’ Feeling excited at the thought of having sex somewhere outside, Ruth jumped out of bed, threw her dressing gown on and walked towards the shower.
James and Ruth stood passionately kissing at their usual meeting place. Ruth, much to her mother’s disapproval, had bought a shorter skirt and a clingy top, which accentuated her pert breasts. James, on seeing her, was amazed at how sexy she really was. He had always considered her to be outstandingly attractive, yet Ruth looked more stunning than he could have imagined.
Breaking away from their kiss, Ruth said, “So, are you ready for tonight? I can’t wait to see if any of them hit it off. Your mates and mine.”
James sniggered. “My lot will be happy at any attention that comes their way.”
“It’s Andy who’s the big boy, isn’t it?”
“Yes. He’s tall and athletic.”
“I’ll point him out to Mandy.”
“The one with the tits,” James grinned.
James kissed Ruth, hugging her. “I’m sure he’ll notice.”
Ruth nodded. “He will.”
The couple began walking towards the town, discussing possibilities of where to make love. Ruth, now confident as regards sex, wished to try a different position, only she did not relish the idea of going home with tell-tale signs of her nocturnal activity, such as grass or mud on her.
Placing his hand upon Ruth’s bottom, James could feel that she was wearing a thong once again. He squeezed her peachy buttock. Ruth smiled at him, and feeling naughty, placed her hand upon his groin region and gently cupped it. The pair laughed and exchanged risqué comments, kissing once again.
Entering The Crown, James saw his friends in the corner of the room. Andy and Mal were sitting with five other members of the group. James waved, before walking to the bar with Ruth, both ordering non-alcoholic drinks. Sitting down with the group, James introduced Ruth to his friends, all of whom were polite, making jocular remarks about James, who retorted with comments of his own. Ruth, who had been nervous, now felt relaxed, yet wishing for her friends to hurry up and join her.
Fifteen minutes later, eight of Ruth’s friends arrived, purchasing drinks at the bar before approaching the table occupied predominantly by sixteen year old males. Ruth, relieved that her friends had finally joined her, greeted them and performed the introductions. Mandy, who as ever was wearing tight clothing, immediately took an interest in Andy, while Vicky sat looking at each, sitting like a bird of prey, sizing up her victim. Mal, who was nervous around girls, took an interest in Marie, who was a petite auburn haired girl. Dressed in a loose transparent blouse which allowed her small, lacy bra to show, and a short skirt, Marie was an attractive girl, although not striking. Aware of the interest being shown in her, Marie felt good about herself.
“Well, you lot,” Pete, a spotty yet good looking lad said, “the good news is that my folks are out tonight, and that I have some booze, so in half an hour, we’ll get out of here and make our way back. A few others will meet us there. I will need you all to chip in for the booze, though.’
“Good stuff,” said James, who noticed a familiar looking face. He thought: Oh, no; it’s the scruffy couple. Glancing at Ruth, he could see that she too had noticed. He squeezed her hand in an attempt to provide reassurance.
“Is this okay with your parents?” Ruth nervously asked.
“Of course, just as long as everyone behaves.”
“Pete’s parents are so easy going,” James said to Ruth.
The group spent the next half an hour, laughing, joking and indulging in friendly banter. Ruth, however, received hateful stares from the grubby looking girl who had previously threatened her. Andy, who was not afraid of using his fists, told James and Ruth not to worry, as he was ready for trouble, should it arise.
Getting up to leave, Ruth averted her gaze from the aggressive girl, who continued to glower. The petite auburn haired Marie, who had picked up upon Ruth’s discomfiture, walked beside her friend, whispering in her ear that she liked James and his friends.
All in high spirits, the group wended their way merrily down the street; however, their jollity suffered a setback when a voice bellowed, “I fucking well told ya not to come here again!”
They turned around to see the girl approaching with her boyfriend in tow. He said, “You don’t take the fucking hint, do ya!”
Andy, feeling nervous, stepped forward. “Leave them alone! They’ve done nothing to you!”
“Yes,” said the petite Marie. “Just go back into the pub!”
The girl snarled, “What’s it got to do with you?”
Without warning, the scruffy boy launched himself at Andy, who swerved to his side, lashing out and catching the lad on the side of his head with his fist. The girl, meanwhile, attempted to lunge at Ruth, who moved aside, falling to the ground when the girl’s fist caught her shoulder. Feeling anger building within, Marie moved forward, slapping the girl, who looked incensed. She lunged at Marie, who as fast as lightning, spun around, raised her leg and caught the girl on the side of her head, following her move up with two fast punches to her face.
Seeing the lad about to launch a counter attack upon Andy, she used a similar move upon him. Astounded, the lad snarled at Marie, and threw a punch at her. Marie, enjoying herself, grabbed his arm, pulling him forward. Her fist made harsh contact with his face. As he staggered back, Marie delivered a kick between his legs, kneeing him in the face when he doubled up in agony. With blood pouring from his nose, he fell to the ground, next to his well and truly defeated girlfriend, who looked terrified.
Standing triumphant, Marie said, “You two losers can fuck off! If I ever see or hear of you giving my mates any shit again, I’ll put you both in hospital! Got it – or do you want some more?”
“No, no,” the scruffy lad panted, holding his nose.
Marie poked the girl with her foot. “What about you? Fancy a one on one?”
The girl, whose nose was also bleeding, looked up with a terrified expression. “No.”
“Good. You were lucky tonight, because I’m in a good mood. Bye.”
Mal, who had been about to join in to help Andy, approached Marie. “You’re brill!”
Marie, who had thought Mal to be sweet, said, “Thanks. Karate and Aikido.”
“I think I’m going to have to learn that.”
Marie smiled. “Come along with me sometime.”
“I’d like that.”
Arriving back at Pete’s house, the group helped themselves to drinks, which had been supplied by his brother. James and Ruth stuck together, holding hands and exchanging passionate kisses, uncaring of the comments made by their friends. Andy, who had been treated as a hero by some of the female contingent, was enjoying the attention, yet he could not help looking at Mandy.
Noticing Mandy standing alone, pouring a drink, Andy took a deep breath and walked slowly towards her. ‘I wonder if she’s a virgin,’ he thought. ‘She looks like she does a bit, but I wonder how far she goes.’
Mal, meanwhile, was deep in conversation with Marie, who had taken a shine to him. ‘She’s really sexy,’ thought Mal. ‘I know she hasn’t got a boyfriend, so I might be in luck. I’ll ask her if she wants to go out sometime.
As the evening progressed, the group became merry. The music, although not particularly loud, spurned people on. They laughed and danced, moving from person to person, everyone finding new friends.
Sitting beside Mandy, Andy smiled. “Fancy going out sometime?”
Having relaxed after drinking some alcopops, Mandy leaned towards Andy and kissed him. Pleasantly surprised, Andy put an arm around her, reciprocating the kiss, the couple opening mouths and connecting tongues. Uncaring of those around them, they fell back onto the sofa, completely engrossed in one another.
On the other side of the room, Mal and Marie had been talking freely. Sensing that Marie seemed interested in him, Mal invited her out to the hallway, where it was quieter. Sitting on the stairs, they smiled at one another and kissed. Overwhelmed with passion, Mal placed his hand upon Marie’s knee. ‘He’s really nice. God, he’s nice.’
Feeling a pleasant shiver filter through her, Marie pulled him closer, whispering, “Do you want to go somewhere quiet?”
Unable to believe his ears, Mal said, “Yeah.”
Marie ran her hand up and down Mal’s leg. “Let’s go.”
“My sister’s flat. She’s away. She told me I can stay there.”
Meanwhile, Andy and Mandy were engrossed in each other, Andy having developed an erection, and Mandy feeling that she was becoming wet. Surreptitiously touching Andy’s groin, Mandy received a pleasant surprise. ‘Fucking hell, it’s big,’ she thought.
“Shall we go somewhere?” she whispered.
Unable to believe his luck, Andy said, “Okay. We’ll use Pete’s room.”
“What will he say?”
Andy ran his hand up her leg. “He owes me a favour. Come on.”
Mal and Marie kissed as they walked towards their destination. Marie, who had some previous experience with boys, felt comfortable with her new friend. Having loosened up due to the alcohol, she had begun to feel sexy, becoming more adventurous as their journey progressed. She felt Mal’s buttocks and slipped her hand up inside his shirt, enjoying it when he placed his hand upon her breast.
‘Maybe I should try it tonight,’ she thought. ‘We’ve agreed to see each other, so he’s my boyfriend.’
Mal, who had become hard, wondered, ‘I wonder if she’s up for it. Fuck, she’s sexy.’
Entering the flat, Marie smiled and led Mal through to the kitchen, picking two bottles of beer from the fridge. She opened them and handed one to her partner. “Shall we sit down?”
“Okay.” Suddenly, Mal felt nervous. ‘I wonder if she’ll let me feel her fanny.’
Marie took a swig of the beer and placed the bottle upon the table. Feeling confident, she said, “Mal, have you been with a lot of girls?”
Embarrassed, Mal said, “No. I’ve only ever kissed a couple.”
Marie kissed him and slid her hand up his thigh, feeling his erect penis. Inspired by the hard organ, Marie felt a surge of sexual energy. “Want to do a bit more?”
Pressing her lips upon Mal’s, Marie thought, ‘I hope he’s better than Derek Palmer. He hurt me when he fingered me.’ Their kiss was passionate. Mal fondled Marie’s breasts, feeling excited when he found her nipple. Marie felt a wave of delight at Mal’s gentle touch, pulling his shirt up and exploring his chest as Mal’s other hand stroked her thigh, moving progressively higher. Marie opened her legs and squeezed Mal’s penis, before undoing his belt.
Mal, whose hands were continually wandering, struggled to unclip Marie’s bra-strap, finally succeeding as his other hand made contact with her panties. Marie, who had discussed sex with her elder sister on many occasions, felt supremely confident, undoing the button on Mal’s jeans and unzipping him. Mal, meantime, had begun to remove Marie’s blouse, being aided by his partner, who let go of his jeans, raising her arms to aid him.
Seeing Marie’s naked breasts, Mal was in another world. He delicately stroked them, caressing her pink, puffy nipples while Marie forcefully removed his jeans and boxers. Breaking away from their kiss, she looked down at Mal’s hard member, wrapping her hand around it and moving it up and down. Although Marie had felt penises before, she had never actually seen one.
Sucking on Marie’s hard nipple, Mal rubbed at her panties, feeling her raise her hips. Fumbling, he attempted to remove them, when Marie said, “Fuck it! Let’s get naked properly.” To Mal’s amazement, she stood up, unclipped her skirt and lowered it, along with her panties, revealing her bright ginger pubic hair. “I want to play.”
Suddenly, Mal was worried. “I don’t want you to do this cos you’re pissed.”
Marie, who masturbated regularly, touched her groin. “I’m not.”
Marie knelt down, removing Mal’s jeans and socks, positioning herself between his legs and gripping his five and a half inch erection. Nervously, she retracted his thick foreskin and licked his frenulum, before beginning to run her hand up and down his shaft, whilst stimulating her wet pussy with the other. Not feeling confident enough to perform full oral sex upon him, she was gentle with her strokes, and thirty seconds later Mal ejaculated, his hot cum landing on his chest as Marie watched with wonderment. He groaned softly as he continued to squirt his seed, feeling embarrassed.
Still holding him, Marie raised up, kissing him, her body rubbing against his thick white produce. Softly, she said, “Most guys cum quickly the first few times. Come down onto the floor.”
Seeing his semen on Marie’s pert, pointed breasts, Mal got down onto the floor. Marie kissed him and gently pushed him down. “I want to make love.”
“I’ll get a rubber.”
“No need. I’m on the pill. I have heavy periods, so the doctor put me on.”
With his head swimming slightly from the alcohol, Mal watched as Marie lay on top of him, stroking his still hard penis and moving it between her legs, rubbing it against her hard clitoris and between her pink lips, which were well lubricated. Positioning his glans at the edge of her hole, she wriggled her hips, feeling him just inside. Mal pushed a little. Marie let out a whimper as she continued to kiss her first time lover, who ran his hands up and down her back, also squeezing her firm buttocks.
Once Marie had manoeuvred Mal’s cock all the way into her tight pussy, she began slowly rocking back and forth, raising and lowering herself, shuddering at the sensation of a penis inside her love hole for the first time. “Aaaaaaaaaaaah,” she murmured. Mal moved with her, astounded at how incredible sex felt, and how her tunnel gripped him. Wishing to experience more of Mal inside her, she sat up straight and pushed down upon him, as he cupped her breasts and sensuously felt her small pink nipples. They moved in unison, pushing their pelvises together.
Fuelled with desire, Marie moved to her side, gripping Mal’s buttock, the couple rolling over, ending up with Mal on top. Kissing her, he began pumping in and out of her increasingly wet pussy, Marie moving with him, the sensation of his penis stimulating her vaginal walls, causing a brand new sensation within her. Mal could feel her juices squelching onto his scrotum as he pushed in as far as he could.
“Keep going,” Marie gasped, gripping his moving buttocks. “I’m gonna cum.”
Marie pushed hard against him, feeling her clitoris against his pubis as he varied his strokes. Suddenly, Marie grunted, and Mal could feel yet more sticky fluid on him as she dug her fingers into his back. Mal, although in pain from Marie’s sharp nails, pushed in deep, his loins exploding with an orgasmic eruption. He pumped harder as he fired into her, biting her neck as Marie twisted her pelvis, the couple finally coming to rest, breathless.
“That was good,” Marie said softly, still with Mal inside her.
“Yeah, it was.”
“I’m glad we did it.”
Mal kissed her. “Me too. Are we . . . an item?”
“I would say so.”
“Good. Wow! Er . . . sorry my dick isn’t big.”
Marie pushed her pelvis against him. “It’s big enough for me.”
“Er . . . good.”
After pulling Mal close to her, she kissed him passionately, uncaring that he was now flaccid, and had slipped from her sopping pussy. “Look, my sister told me that it’s not the size of it, but what you do with it, and you do it well.”
Mal rolled off his partner, looking down at her wet pussy, mesmerised by the sight of his semen that was flowing from her. He put his hand down and rubbed his juice into her hair as Marie chuckled. “Your pussy’s gorgeous.”
Marie smiled. “So are you. Shall we stay here tonight?”
Arriving in Pete’s bedroom, Mandy felt an urge to remove her partner’s clothes. She had not had sexual contact for months, and the throbbing between her legs, coupled with the effects of the alcohol, had caused her to throw aside all inhibitions. Without a word, she removed her top and unclipped her bra, exposing her bounteous, round breasts, with sizable nipples and dark pink areolas, as Andy stood in awe. With a cheeky smile, she removed her skirt and slid her black thong down, exposing a shaven vulva, with outer lips that pouted. She tweaked a nipple with one hand, and with her other, she slid a finger between her pussy lips, before licking off the juice.
Andy, who thought he must be dreaming, stood there in astonishment as Mandy ripped his shirt off, and began removing his trousers, pulling down his boxers to expose his thick seven inch circumcised penis, which dribbled precum. Mandy pushed him down onto the bed and knelt between his thighs, pushing his legs into the air and thrusting her tongue into his anus, slobbering around the area. She then inserted a finger, causing Andy to jump. With her finger exploring his rectum, she used her other hand to lift his large tool, and engulfed the glans with her mouth, moving the mobile skin of his shaft with her hand.
Andy lay there, watching as Mandy’s head bobbed up and down, taking a good five inches into her eager mouth. Feeling her finger upon his prostate, Andy groaned loudly, and screwed his eyes up. Mandy continued to move her head up and down, occasionally removing her mouth and licking his length and inserting only his helmet, sucking hard. Applying more pressure upon his prostate, she could feel Andy’s hips lurch. He cried out. “Aaaaaaaaaaaah!”
Mandy felt his sperm jet into her mouth as he wriggled. She continued to pump her mouth and maintained the rectal stimulation.
“Fuck,” Andy cried. “No more, please, no more. Fucking no!”
Pleased with her partner’s reaction, Mandy removed her finger and mouth, looking at him as she swallowed his thick, salty gift. “How was that?”
“Good. Get onto the bed.”
Andy did as instructed and lay down with his head on the pillow, watching as Mandy climbed upon the bed, facing away from him. With her legs either side, she exposed her wet pussy, which opened up to reveal smooth, glistening dark pink flaps. Holding his still hard member, she guided it towards her opening and lowered herself onto it.
“Fuck, it’s thick!” Andy watched as her vagina slowly engulfed his thick penis, taking his virginity as she did so. Mandy, having never experienced a penis of this girth, struggled, grunting as he stretched her. Finally, Andy’s cock was all the way in, and Mandy rocked back, feeling him at the top of her tunnel. She began moving rhythmically as Andy watched her take him in. “I’m going to turn around.”
Looking down at Andy, she smiled, lifted herself off and turned around. She reinserted him and pushed against his pubis, leaning down to kiss him. Andy opened his mouth and their tongues moved wildly. Mandy broke away from their kiss, sitting up. Watching her grind against him, Andy craned up, sucking her erect nipples, holding her tightly.
For several minutes the couple moved together, both feeling pre-orgasmic. Having never been sucked before, and never previously having touched a vagina, Andy was in another world. This young adventurous woman had taken his virginity in the most incredible way possible. Watching her vaginal lips around his length, Andy could feel himself nearing his climax.
“I’m going to cum,” Mandy panted. “Push into me!”
Andy did as instructed, pushing as hard as he could, as he cupped his lover’s breasts, looking at her expressions. Suddenly, Mandy let out a loud, ear piercing scream, and her body became rigid. Andy continued moving, and Mandy screamed again. As he ejaculated, he pushed hard against her, pulling her down onto him. Mandy flopped down, her body in spasms. Andy could feel that his entire groin was soaked as he softly stroked her back.
“That was nice,” Andy said softly.
“It was. It fucking well was!”
Suddenly, the door burst open, and in rushed James, Ruth and Pete. Pete said, “You dirty cunts!”
Andy looked up at his partner, who cupped her breasts. They both burst out laughing. Feeling naughty, Mandy jumped off, turned away and bent down, picking up her skirt. “Sorry, but do you mind if me and my boyfriend get dressed?”
Ruth, who was transfixed by the sight of Andy’s penis, said, “We’ll leave you to it.”
“Yeah,” said James.
Pete stood slowly shaking his head. “I’ve got to sleep in there.”
Mandy picked up a tissue and wiped between her legs. “Thanks, Pete.”
James burst out laughing. “See you later.”
James and Ruth left the party half an hour later. They had both enjoyed the evening, but wished to be alone. The feelings inside Ruth had increased tenfold. She looked dreamily at James, not wishing to leave him that evening. ‘I love him so much. I just can’t say goodnight. Not tonight.’
“What’s up?” James asked, having picked up on Ruth’s unease.
“I want to stay with you tonight.”
“I wish we could.”
Ruth grinned. “Marie went off with your friend Mal. They’ll be at her sister’s flat.”
“If I’m with Marie, my mum will let me stay out. Marie won’t mind. There’s a spare room.”
James, aware that his parents would be fine, called them, while Ruth called Marie, who was initially uncertain, yielding when Ruth pleaded with her. The couple then bid farewell to their friends and commenced the short walk to the flat. Ruth explained that she would call her parents once she was with Marie.
Marie, who was unashamedly in her underwear, opened the door, smiling at the new arrivals and leading them in. Immediately, Ruth called home, requesting permission to stay with Marie, who also spoke, confirming that the girls would be together for the night. With permission granted, the girls joined James and Mal, who were in the living room. Mal wore only his boxers. After Marie had given everyone drinks, they discussed the evening. Mal and Marie were highly amused to hear about their friends being caught in flagrante, asking if either of them had been embarrassed.
Finally, they turned in for the night. James and Ruth used the spare room, standing before each other, looking deeply into each other’s eyes.
“I love you,” said, Ruth.
“I love you too.”
James lifted Ruth’s top off, marvelling at her lustrous skin as he removed his own. They both stripped to their underwear. Looking down at James’s tight briefs, Ruth smiled. James admired Ruth’s lacy bra and thong, moving forward to kiss her. Together they fell onto the bed, their lips locked tightly together as their hands moved in a frenzy to remove the remaining clothing. A cocktail of love and desire dominated them, controlling them. James removed Ruth’s bra, kissing her nipples.
The feeling of James’s mouth and hand upon her breasts sent waves of delight through Ruth, who lay back in surrender, gently stroking his back. Feeling his hands touching her thong she opened her legs, inviting his gentle touch. Kissing her with an unrivalled passion, James continued to massage her remaining undergarment, causing her tingling to intensify. Ruth lay there at her lover’s mercy.
James, who was also consumed with pure passion, began slipping the lacy item down as Ruth raised her hips to aid his plight, lifting a leg. He ran his fingers through her dusky brown pubic hair, arriving at her shaven outer lips, softly running his fingers along them. Touching Ruth’s inner lips, James could feel that she was extremely wet. He ran his fingers from her seeping entrance, up to her fully erect, prominent clitoris, feeling her shudder. With his other hand he began slipping his briefs down and began kissing her neck, which furthered her pleasure.
Feeling her nipple, James moved on top of Ruth, manoeuvring between her open legs and guiding his pulsing erection to the edge of her vaginal opening, slowly pushing in and feeling an excited gratification when she groaned. He looked down at her, their eyes meeting as he pushed himself all the way into her. Ruth pulled him tightly against her, wrapping her legs around him as he began to move in and out, very slowly.
Ruth began moving in unison. The sensation strengthened with every movement, her vaginal muscles contracting and squeezing her lover’s hard member. Ruth clung onto him as she felt yet more vibrations flood through her body. She pushed hard against him, her clit being stimulated by his pubis, in addition to her pussy, which continued to grip her lover.
James bit her neck. “I’m going to cum, babe.”
“Yeah, yeah,” Ruth panted. Her entire vulva was on fire, and her body beginning to convulse with sheer power.
Feeling Ruth gripping him yet tighter, James increased the speed and depth of his strokes. He could feel his orgasm approaching, and kissed Ruth with the love that he felt. Moments later, his groin erupted, and he groaned loudly as he ejaculated deep into her pussy. Ruth, who reached her cataclysmic climax, opened her mouth wide. Such was the force of this latest orgasm, she made no sound; barely a squeak emerging. She merely screwed her eyes, gripping onto James as her entire body shook. She could feel jet after jet of hot fluid fill her tunnel, which contracted and pulsed. Finally, when James had finished delivering his seed, she let out a loud and satisfied grunt. “Uuuuuuuuuugh!”
James flopped onto her, still gently moving his hips from side to side as he felt Ruth’s breasts and kissed her neck. They lay together in complete bliss, exchanging kisses and whispering sweet nothings.
“That was the best yet,” Ruth gasped.
James brushed his lips against hers. “Good. It was for me as well, but I just want to please you.”
Ruth closed her eyes and hugged her partner. “I love you.”
“I love you as well. I really do.”
“Promise me one thing.”
“Never leave me.”
Looking into Ruth’s pretty blue eyes, James smiled. The young woman who had accepted every part of him was truly wondrous. Having seen the end of Andy and Mandy’s lustful encounter, James knew what love and sex were all about. ‘I don’t want what they did. I only want Ruth. She’s all I need. Love is wonderful.’
With genuine feeling, James said, “I promise.”
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