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This is my first story. It is slow and this first part doesn't have a lot of action. I promise it will get a lot better the more it continues. Tell me how you like it or don't like it. Give me suggestions.

This is a story about the Disney Cruise I took last summer and how I became what society would call, a pedophile.

Here is some information about me. My name is Max. At time of my cruise, I was 15(almost 16) and had just finished my junior year in high school. I was, and still am, about 5 '7 with dark brown hair and brown eyes.

I had just walked onto the Disney Magic for the second year in a row. The trip my family and I were taking was the Western Mediterranean 11 night long cruise. I had been looking forward to this since my cruise the year before. I was extremely exuberant to finally be back on board the Disney Magic.

The first thing my family and I did was go up to our room 6280 and unpack our luggage. My family always unpacks right away. After that I was free to do whatever I pleased on board the ship, within reason of course. Because I could decide, I went up to deck 11 and wondered around.

The goodbye party was scheduled to start around 4:30 pm and it was only 3 pm. As I was walking around I noticed that the ship was not as well kept up as it normally was. I later learned it was because the ship would be dry-docked in a couple months and the repairs would be addressed then.

After looking around for a bit I headed back down to my room and went with my family to the deck party. My mom and little sister Holly (she was 12) decided to listen to the performers while I just waited for the ship to leave dock. When the time came, I got to watch Barcelona slip out into the distance. It was a fun sight.

After the party my family and I went back to the room and then to supper. I was really hoping that we would be seated with another family with some cute girls, but we weren't. It was just the three of us together for the 11 dinners. It wasn't as bad as you might think though.

After dinner I decided to check out the teen club called the Vibe. As I went into the smoke stack, the first teenager I saw was a girl that just stunned me. She was the prettiest girl I had ever seen. She had blonde hair, blue eyes, was about 5 '2 and had a B cup size. I could honestly say that I wanted her from that moment more than any other girl I had ever fantasied about. She was talking to another girl that was about 5 '4 and had red/brownish hair. Her tits were about a large B and I almost got a boner just looking at those two.

Of course I just walked past them casually and meet some other people. The counselors, Alfred and Kayla were nice but kind of annoyed me from the beginning. Kayla walked up to me and asked, "Hi whats your name and how old are you?" I said, "I'm Max and I am 16." She then told me a list of about 20 different rules. After that I told her, "I understand," and that "I must leave to catch the play tonight." It started in 20 minutes.

I then met up with my family and went to see the play. To be honest, I fell asleep and don't even remember what it was about so don't ask me about it.

By the time the play had finished, it was 10 pm and I was exhausted so I just went to the room and relaxed. I tried to watch a movie but I completely and utterly failed by falling asleep within seconds.

The next morning my mom woke my sister and I up at 7:30 am so we could get ready for our first port, Malta. I took a shower and then we went up to deck 9 and got breakfast. We got ready to leave the ship shortly after that.

As we were heading down to deck 1 to get off the ship, I noticed that the really cute blonde girl from the day before was looking at me. I wanted to go talk to her but my mom and brother had already started to get off the ship so all I got to do was catch a quick glimpse of her as I left.

My family and I spent the whole day at the fortified island and had a lot of fun. Around 5:30 pm we came back to the ship and got ready for supper.
Supper was delicious just like I expected but it was also boring because it was just my family around.

After supper I was free to do whatever I wanted for the rest of the night but I had to be back in the room by 1 am. I decided to go back to the Vibe and see what was happening.

When I walked in, I met a kid named Josh. He was talking to a group of other people and then walked up to me. He said, "Hey I'm Josh. What is your name?" I told him, "I'm Max."

The girls from the group were already trying to get him to come back over by them so he invited me over to the group of other people he was talking to. He introduced to some people such as Adam, Jake, and Kelsey. They were nice but I zoned out of what they were saying when I spotted that blonde again standing next to that same girl with red/brownish hair. Josh noticed I was staring at them and said, "Lets go over there." He grinned and took me over to meet those girls.

I'm going to be honest, I was nervous as hell. I was never good at meeting girls or people in general. Don't get me wrong, I have some friends, I'm not that bad with people. When it comes to girls though, I never know what to say or what to do with my hands.

When we went over there, Josh said, "Hey girls, what's up?" The brown haired girl said, "Not much, who is that?" I said, "I'm Max and you are?" The brown hair girl said, "I'm Abigail and this is Rachael. How old are you?" "I'm 16, a junior. What about you two?" Rachel said, "We are 14 and both freshman." I said, "Cool." She then said that they were going to leave, Josh told me to come along so the four of us went down to deck 10 and started walking around outside.

We just hung out casually and learned more about each-other. Abigail has a little brother and Rachel is an only child. Josh has an older brother that didn't come along on the vacation. He was in the Marines and was actually in Afghanistan at the time.

After about 2 hours, the girls went their own way and Josh and I were left. We headed up to the Vibe to see what was up. I met some other guys up there playing guitar hero. It was just a fun way to waste time and chill.

The next morning, my mom woke Holly and me up at about 7:30 am again. It would always be the same routine. I took a shower and then we went up to deck 9 for breakfast again. We then got ready for our next port, Sicily.

Sicily was amazing but I was so tired from the trip. My family had just gotten back when it was time to eat dinner so we quickly got ready and went.

After dinner I went to the Vibe to see if Josh or hopefully Rachael was there. She was there so I went up to her and said, "Hey, what's up?" 

"Nothing much. How was your tour?"

"How did you know I took a tour?"

"I saw you on deck 1 with a tour group."

"Yea, it was pretty good. What did you do?"

"Just walked around with my parents. Hey, I'm gunna head down, you wanna come?"


We went down to deck 9 and hung out. We talked more about family, friends, likes/dislikes, that stuff. After an hour of this, we spotted Josh and Adam. They joined us.

Later that night, after Rachael left to go to her room, Josh grinned and said, "So, what did you two do?" I responded, "Nothin." as I pushed him a bit and raced Josh and Adam to the Vibe.

That night, Alfred was hosting games so I joined in on the most awesome game of monkey in the middle ever. This still is the best game I have ever played. It was epic with 15 people sitting on furniture while throwing a ball at you trying to get you out. It was kind of like war. It was vicious.

We kept playing for a while until there were only a few people left. Kayla had started a game of poker so a lot of people left to do that. It was fun nonetheless. At around 12, people started to leave the Vibe but there were still a lot of teens around. A few guys and I went and played more guitar hero.

The next day, my family and I went to Pompeii and Mount Vesuvius. I'll skip all the boring details because they are basically the same. After the trip we had dinner again and I went back to the Vibe. This night was going to be fun.

Adam came up to me and told me that him and a group of people were going to go see Pirates of the Caribbean 4. I told him I'd come along so Kelsey, Jake, Rachael, Abigail, him, and me all went.

Rachael grabbed a sit next to me on the right and we chatted until the movie started. Half way through, she fell asleep and was slumped on my shoulder a bit. I didn't mind. Anyways, Josh comes and wakes her up. He said, "Sorry bro." and nudged me. I tell him, "Fuck off." He just laughs softly and we all watch the rest of the movie, awake.

After the movie, Josh, Kelsey, Jake, and I go back up to the Vibe. I hung out up there playing spoons with a few people for a while until I got bored and left.

I got some ice cream on deck 9 before they closed it and took my sweet time eating it. I was thinking about my friends at home. I hadn't texted them for a week and they wanted to know what was happening on the ship. I wished I had WiFi access but it cost so much.

After I was done, I went back to the Vibe. A dance party had just started; I had forgotten about this. There were a few people dancing but not many. After a half an hour, around 11:30, Rachael and Abigail showed up.

Abigail then went and started to dance with Josh so I went and chatted with Rachael. By this time, many teens were dancing. I said, "Hey, come dance with me." I took her hand and pulled her onto the dance floor.

Just as I did that, a slow dance started. I thought, what luck. I was nervous as hell. I couldn't believe that I got this really cute blond freshman right in front of me and she is going to slow dance with me. I usually get rejected.

I then put my other hand out in front of her and she took it. I scooted forward slowly closing part of the gap between us. She let go of my hands and put her hands around my neck. I moved mine down her small, gorgeous body until I reached her hips. I looked into her bright blue eyes, her face lit up. She was wearing light cherry lipstick on her moist lips. I wanted to kiss her so bad. She wore a light blue top that exposed a little of that cleavage and jeans that fit her snug.

She whispered to me, "Are you nervous?" I responded with, "I'm the older one here." She gently smiled and I smiled back. She then moved in a bit closer to me and my hands slipped down a little too far. I accidentally grabbed her soft, perfectly sized ass. She then closed the gab between us. By this time, I was getting a little hard, I hoped she wouldn't notice. As far as I know, she didn't. Her body felt so amazing against mine though.

I asked her, "Did you have a formal dance last year?" She replied, "Yeh I just went with my friends."

"Thats's cool, wanna do something fun?"

"What do you mean?"

"Have you been on Disney cruises before?"

"No, this is my first."

"Then follow me."

The slow song was just ending and I lead her out into the hall on deck 10. I knew I was taking a risk but I decided I would do it anyway.

I led her outside on deck 10 to the very front of the ship. I told her to step up on the railing for a better view of the ocean(yeh right, like stepping up would make a difference), she bought it. I took a deep breath and just like I planned, I stepped up and put my arms around her, holding her to the railing. I then said, "How's the view?" She giggled and replied, "Good, but I'm being squished." Right then and there I knew I blew it. I stepped down off the railing and let her step down. She turned to me, then told me, "Come here." and she ran off down the deck.

I followed her, off course. She ran down to deck 9, inside the building, and into one of the elevators. I barely caught up before the door closed. She took us down to deck 5 where we went to the empty movie theater. It was almost 1 am by then. 

Once inside, she checked to make sure it was clear and led me down half way. She turned to me, walked right up to me, and gave me a sweet, delicious kiss. I was practically frozen. When she started to pull back, I put my arms around her and looked her directly in those bright blue eyes. At the same time, I pulled her back to my lips and started to kiss her back. I could taste cherry from her lips. She started to open her mouth wider and I started to play with her mouth using my tongue. She got the idea pretty fast and we she started to use her tongue. After 5 minutes of non-stop making out, out lips broke apart and I said, "Wow." She responded by kissing me some more.

This went on for 10 more minutes. The next time we broke apart, she said that she had to get back to her room. Before she left, I grabbed her wrist and asked her, "What are you doing tomorrow?" She responded, "I'll see you at the Vibe." and winked. It was a sea day tomorrow....

anonymous readerReport

2012-08-21 01:31:51
Do you think that you can finish it?

anonymous readerReport

2012-08-10 10:18:17
All they did was make out? Fuck this

anonymous readerReport

2012-04-20 12:43:23
Geez! Didn't know you could not use quotation marks in the comments. almost as hard to read as some of the stories posted here...Sorry, but my suggestions are still

anonymous readerReport

2012-04-20 12:41:29
Overall, it has some potential. You might try using more words like "I'm" instead of "I am", and "We're" instead of "we are". And I agree with the people who said to be less detailed about every movement on the ship, and every last detail about the people you meet. And give the guy more "Alone-Time" with the girl.

anonymous readerReport

2012-04-20 08:21:12
Wow, really slow start! Too much detail on the ship, and where you went on the ship. Agree with the thing to drop the background characters unless you plan to bring them into a teenage orgy in someone's cabin.

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