Right- this is the first part to yet another series...
Hello Gentle readers... I'll warn you now, the following contains no sex, wait before you go running off I want you to read the setup and then read the rest... do you want to know what happens next? If you can keep the rating above 90% till the 1st or if its there by the first I'll roll out part 2 if not... I'll stop writing this and go back to some other story I'm working on and forget about it. Deal? awesome! Remember I can be influenced by these things so please let me know and by all means use whatever means at your disposal to contact me and tell me what you want and why you want it and whatever else you want, Be it Email, PM, Magic Mirror or crystal ball... though I have yet to have any real successful communication via crystal ball or magic mirror, but for you my fans I'll give it my best shot. Thank you for reading.

I was doing well, hell I had put in money in Apple and Dell at their IPO, got a little bit of Microsoft in their early years and well you know I was not hurting, I worked sure but I really didn’t need the job not that I let anyone in on that. I drove a fairly plain little car, piece of crap Saab, which is to say it always needed something. I was living single and enjoying myself, never really running out and spending shitloads of cash like some people do. I was doing okay. What the hell had drawn me to go and browse a dollar store, eh well lets just say that you can always find your next wannabe baby mamma at the dollar store. Shit people don’t shop there because their frugal, they shop there because they have to.

Imagine my surprise when I ran into Becky. Becky had been my babysitter when I was growing up. And here she was in the Dollar store looking older and a little worse for wear. “Becky wow long time no see!” I smiled at here.

“I… Do I know you?” she responded.

“You used to baby-sit for me remember Robbie Jenings?”

“Oh wow! Long time!”

“Yeah so how are you doing?”

“Well… that’s a long story.”

“Okay well if you want we can talk about it.”

“Sorry Robbie, I have to get back and feed my kids.”

“Wow you have kids?”

“Yes, Rebecca is a sophomore, and Tracy is going to be a freshman next year and my little baby Kelly is just a little behind her.”

I smiled. “Well if you want some time give me a call and I’ll take you out to dinner.”

“That would be nice but I think lunch might be more optimal”

“Fine” I said and followed her to the register. I waited for the cashier to ring it up and before she could I swiped my card.

“Robbie! Don’t do that.”

“Why not?” I asked as the Cashier handed me the receipt. I scribbled my number on the back of it and handed it to her.

“Because, I have my pride”
“Fine then you can buy lunch” I grinned at her.

She rolled her eyes at me and said “Okay fine”

I helped her carry her things out to the car and waved as she drove away. I went home and it wasn’t until two days later that she called me, I was at work, but I managed to get away for lunch with her. Subway what a surprise, I walked in and stood in line next to her and we got our sandwiches.

“Why did you do that?”

“Why did I do what?”

“Buy my groceries.”

“It seemed like the thing to do.” I smiled at her.

“you really didn’t have to.”

“I did it because I wanted to.”


I chuckled, “Well truth be told I had a crush on you when I was a kid and it was a good way to make sure that you called me”


“Really what?”

“You had a crush on me?”

“What boy doesn’t crush on their babysitter”?

She laughed “I suppose there is that”

“And” I added “You looked like you could use the help so I helped, is that so wrong?”

“Only if you expect something out of it”

“Oh well maybe a date?”

“A date, shit Robbie right now I can’t afford to date.”

“Tell you what if you go out with me I’ll pay for the date and the babysitter.”

“Now you’re just being silly”

“Try me”

“I’d like to Robbie but, shit I have to take care of my kids and Tracy wants to have a birthday party.”

“Okay” I said “But I’d still like a date”

“Maybe after”

“Becky, I would like nothing more than to help you out as much as I can”

“Robbie I don’t want to burden you with my problems” she said taking a bite from her sandwich.

“Fine Becky, no strings, just a date you call me and tell me when”

“Okay… it might be a while”

“I have time”

After finishing our sandwiches we went our separate ways. It took a while but she did eventually call, and why she called almost knocked me over when the phone rang.

“Robbie” she said

“Oh Hi Becky.”


“What is it Becky.”

“I’m being evicted.”


“Can you help me out?”

“How would you like me to help you?”

“I don’t know.”

“Well how much do you need to stop the eviction?”

“Four thousand dollars”
“I see, and when are you being evicted”


“Okay,” I said “you can do one of two things,”

“Okay” Becky said.

“First is accept my help today and I’ll go pay off your rent and start going out with me”

“Or?” She asked.

“Or you can call me tomorrow and I’ll offer to let you live at my place”

“Me and my girls?”

“My rules”

“What are your rules?”

“Oh if you want those you have to wait for tomorrow”

“Um okay, um how about you make things right with my landlord”

“Fine, tell me where and I’ll be there” She gave me the address to one of the lower rent apartments in the area.

It took a trip to the bank and then a short drive to the apartment complex, and after getting Becky involved everything was settled, her rent was paid and I even paid the following months rent. As we walked out of the office she looked at me and said “I suppose this means that you want me to put out.”

“Only if you want to Becky”

“I feel cheap having to ask you for help, and cheaper still that it was on the condition that we go out on a date.”

“Actually I was hoping for several dates”

“Oh?” she responded.

“Well first I don’t want you to think that I look at you as something cheap like that. I actually really would like to get to know you, and well be friends and date”


“No I want you to take me to your apartment and I’ll bend you over the kitchen table and fuck you like a sled dong” I laughed.

Becky looked at me a second and then laughed too realizing that I was joking.


“How about Friday night?”


“What about the kids?”

“Call or find a babysitter”


“Or is Tina not old enough to watch the other two?”

“I suppose she is?”

“Well then I’ll pay her if that’s acceptable to you”

“I’ll think about it”


I got in my car and Becky leaned over giving me an eyeful of her generous cleavage and she kissed me on the cheek. “Thanks, Thanks for helping me”


“Friday” she responded.

Friday couldn’t come quickly enough and when it did I drove to her house and me the girls. Becky opened the door and let me in and I told Rebecca that I would pay her to watch her sisters tonight and that she was in charge and that if there were no problems that I would give her a bonus.

She agreed to that and Becky and I were on our way to the Movies.


2012-04-26 17:16:49
Kitsune Lord said it - Great start giving the characters history and humanity, well written. As an opener 9.5/10 . . . .I'm waiting CJ


2012-04-26 15:59:46
Very good start of a story it has lots of potential and i hope you don't let that slip away because i will be happy to read it.

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2012-04-26 13:46:02
A real good start and would very much like to see where you can go with this story.

anonymous readerReport

2012-04-26 10:06:24
Good start and holds a lot promise.

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2012-04-26 05:55:47
Good back story, with alot of potential. I hope you carry on. Split3

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