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didn't see this coming
So this is my first story so please be kind and give me your criticism

firstly let me start by telling you a little bit about me at the time
of the story, I was 18, about 5" 5 but had a toned and fairly muscley
build, no six pack but clear definition

I had been dating this girl Jade for a year now, she was stunning,
5ft 2, slim but with a plump ass and very perky C cups. We had done
everything together from our first kiss to taking each others cherry,
now a year in we had started to get pretty serious

one day we were in bed trying to watch a film while spooning, about 5
minuets in could feel the stirring of horneyness building up, now Jade
had always had been very easy to get turned on, today was no exception

I started by slowly brushing her long brown hair away from her slender
neck, then slowly and gently placed a kiss on her neck, then another
kiss and another kiss, slowly working my way around her neck and up to
her waiting mouth, I get her a little peck on the lips then went back
to my original position back at her neck

As I spent more time on her neck she started to shuffle around a
little more, I knew it was working, I backed up a little and started
to kiss my way up to her left ear, she loves it when I nibble on her

just a few seconds after I nibble she quickly span round to face me
and planted a big passionate kiss on my lips, I had planned on slowly
seducing her, apparently she had other idea

she sat up for a second and ripped off her t shirt, revealing her
beautiful C cup breast wrapped up in the sexiest pink and black bra
only to slam straight back down to my lips. While passionately kissing
she encouraged my to remove my shirt, it didn't take me long to
receive the hint.

As soon as I lay back down she dove for my right nipple. straight away
she bites down hard making me wince with pain, she knows I love it
though, she stars kissing, licking and blowing on my nipple until it
is hard as a diamond, only to then repeat the same process to the
other nipple

while working on my nipple her hand slowly snakes down to my jeans,
with one hand she unbuttons them, then yanks them off me boxer short
and all, Im a bit surprised, sometimes she can be a bit forceful but
normally Im the dominant one, ill be honest Im enjoying this new Jade,
its very exciting and new

she quickly kisser her way down to my rock hard cock, giving it a
squeeze with her hand then dives straight to my balls bathing them
with her hungry tong

She spits on my shaft then worker her hand up and down roughly, giving
my 8" cock the handshake of its life, she looks up at me with a
menacing glint in her eye, one I don't think I have ever seen before.
Then suddenly she stands up, walks over to her draws and pulls out an
old school tie. She tells me to put my arms up next to the bed head, I
obey, it’s great to see the kinky side of her I never knew she had. As
she ties me up I look her in the eye and tell her "I love you" she
smiles and says "wait until you see what I have planner for you, I
knew you wouldn't be able to sit through this film, hell I don't think
I could have"

I start to wonder, how long exactly has she been planning this? What
else has she got in store?

She kisses my lips hard and fast then down to my neck, quickly gives
my nipple another bite and a kiss then wraps her soft warm mouth
around my rigid member, swirling her tong around and around, working
my balls with her hand

Then before I know what’s going on she give her finger a quick suck
and shoves it straight up my unsuspecting arse hole, my hips rise up
in surprise while she slowly works her finger in and out of my
spasming sphincter

I have never felt such an incredible feeling in my life, my hole body
was tingling, I laid there bucking with pleasure as Jade stared to
fuck my virgin hole with her finger. I looked down to see her grinning
from ear to ear, one hand rubbing manically at her snatch the other
pumping a finger in and out of my hole

Then with one foul swoop she engulfed my cock head with her warm moist
mouth and inserted a second finger up my ass and started to rub my prostate, I couldn’t take it any
more, I tried to warn her but it was no good, my ball exploded with
such velocity I thought I might nock her out. String after string shot
out of my rigid cock like a rifle, I open my eye to see Jade trying to
keep my load in her mouth but it was no good, one last spurt and it
all started pouring out of her mouth, down her chin and then down her

As I said there trying to recover from the strongest orgasm of my
life, Jade cleaned her self up and then went to leave to room. I said
“wait, you need to untie me” she just laughed and said in the sexiest
voice “Oh Im no where near down with you yet”

i couldn't believe it, i have never seen her like this before, with such passion and a domineering spirit. As i drifted off i wondered what else she had planned, this was certainly looking like it was going to be an interesting weekend

To be continued if people want more, please let me know what you thought either way

anonymous readerReport

2012-07-01 01:12:25
i agree on the spell check, good story though. definately want to see more.

anonymous readerReport

2012-05-19 14:37:47
loved it whee is part 2

anonymous readerReport

2012-05-18 18:37:46
Was pretty gd bit short nd defo spell check but do a 2nd 1

anonymous readerReport

2012-05-18 08:43:50
Spell check and proofread, don't rush to post until you sure it's decent.

anonymous readerReport

2012-05-18 03:23:55
The tongue is that organ/muscle in your mouth. Please use a spell checker.
Good Story start, but the flow is interrupted by spelling errors and typos.

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