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no harsh comments please..,
This is a painfull story not for soft hearts and also dont get enraged as it is a harsh truth of our past and must be enlightened so im realy sorry for if anyone's sentiments are hurted i undrsntnd every sentiment of female as im also one of them.... It is a story of a gorgeous and cute princess....aliena.... of "19 "years of age...,whose kingdom was conquered by mongol lord all her family commited succide or were murdered but her fate was different and painful she was captured by a human trafficker of persia and was sold to a cruel roman noble commander who took her to rome ...""by this time aliena prepared her mind and body to accept her fate and obey her owner...""".., and on reaching rome aliena ,s master tore her gown from top and squeezed her soft breasts and pinched her cute pink nipples cruely this made aliena scream in pain this made her master angry and he threw her on floor and beaten her with legs aliena cried with pain but her master didnt sieze beating her but rather started hitting her with iron rod this lead to furious pain this made her body full of sweat , blood and red marks when her master got tired of beating her cruely then he did his final move the cruelest of all he took a fired wooden log from the fireplace this filled her with fear all her body was sweating due to fear sweat also sored her fresh wounds of beating which were aching....,, master was moving closer and closer to her she tried to flee but maids bondaged her ,,,master cruely inserted the fire log in her vagina she screamed and fainted and then the log was removed from her vagina...,then she was stripped nude leaving nothing on her cute body the she was groomed and bathed and tied on a wooden table when she got out of her faintness her master was sitting on her belly and sucking her large gorgeous breasts and bitting nipples after almost two hours of non stop sucking he stopped and said"her tits are good soft and sweet but only missing thing is breast milk"so i think u understand to the maid standing there and then master left after he left maid tied her belly to the table aleina was confused what was happening then maid took a rope and tied aliena,s tits to each other extreamly tight then she injected a full glass of cum in her vagina using a funnel then she filled a injection of cum and injected it in her tits and nipples twice this lead to sweare pain to aliena after 2-3 mins two male slaves came and started punching and sucking her large soft tits for many hours this was the end of cruelty at night while leaving one of the male crushed alienas boob by his shoe she broke out in tears all night she cried in pain but no one was kind enough to help her.., her nipples were hard and sore her tits were paining due to sucking punching crushing and not to forget the tight rope which bounded her tits and something painful was also going inside her but dont know what..? this was because of cum forcibly injected in her which leaded to temporary loss of fertility these pains continued whole night next day she was feeded , bathed etc then the whole yesterday's procedures were repeated this continued till 1 and a half week which lead showers of milk in her tits all three were happy of there achievement aliena was also happy for end of daily tortures done to her.. then they removed all her ropes and dressed her in a vintage tight gown and presented her to master and left the room aliena was feared of master about what will he now do to her body,master then locked the room and tore alienas top using his sharp sword then he harshly grabbed alienas right tit and pulled her to bed and loughed "ha ha u im cruel nah ha huh.., then he jumped over alienas belly and said you are my property and im your proud owner ok.., then aliena said yes master then he started sucking her tits roughly after sucking them he called the maid and show aliena her worth and left then maid examined aliena's well built body and then she squeezed aliena's tits and milking her rythmaticly like a cow into a bowl this was not only milk it was milk recieved from intruding pain to aliena then the maid threw the milk bowl on floor then she took iron pins and taking a pin on her left tit she slowly pushed it into her tit aliena screamed in pain but the maid laughed at her..,and hitted on her tits several times the she pinched her nipple and streched it in a extreme way then suddenly some soldiers came pushed the maid back and tied the ropes to aliena,s tits and attached the rope to a horseman and ran into the town when they reached all her body was ruined all body was full of blood breasts were extreamly damaged and aliena was on verge of dying...please dont post dangerous comments if liked then there will absolutely part 2

anonymous readerReport

2013-01-13 18:02:57
The teacher is a prfoossienal young man in his mid 20s. He has wanted to be an educator for his entire life and loves his job and enjoys helping his students. One of his students is an attractive young woman that seems to have taken a liking for her teacher. The teacher is not impervious to her charms but realizes how inappropriate it would be to pursue anything romantic. Still there is chemistry between the two and it is difficult for them to resist. The student is seventeen years old and one of the teacher's better students. She is a smart, sweet, and beautiful young woman. They talk frequently and exchange emails the discussions are usually about literature (the subject the teacher teaches is English) but occasionally veer into the personal department. The teacher also occasionally meets with the student outside of class to help her work on an essay she is writing. They meet once or twice a week at a coffee shop. The student and teacher have not (yet) done anything of a sexual nat

anonymous readerReport

2012-10-13 13:42:09
Good storyline its clear English is not your strongpoint. Try attending Esl classes on line. You will be okay and positive you will be able to express yourself more freely and fluently.

anonymous readerReport

2012-06-07 03:34:23
This story could be pretty awesome, truly, but it is very difficult to read. Try having someone proof read your work and if that is not possible at less use the spelling/grammar check. When I copied and pasted this into a Word doc (Don’t worry- I am NOT saving it.) there were over 50 errors that instantly appeared. In addition try using multiple paragraphs, not only would it be more ascetically pleasing but having multiple paragraphs helps to improve the flow of a story which makes it so much easier to read. Good luck with your future works. This could be pretty awesome but it is very difficult to read. Try having someone proof read your work and if that is not possible at less use the spelling/grammar check. In addition try using multiple paragraphs, not only is it more ascetically pleasing but it makes it much easier to read. Good luck with your future works.


2012-06-07 01:32:38
Absolute Crap : Spacing . . . the pronoun I is always a CAPITAL LETTER and u is not a word - you is a word. . . . .you are an illiterate. Please stop writing until you get at least a primary school education.

anonymous readerReport

2012-06-06 18:31:18
my name is Dax Gray and im going to kill you

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