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This is complete fiction,and my first story.I wanted to try and expan my writing from just supernatural fiction to sex stories *shrugs* I guess we'll see how it goes....
I never considered myself an average looking 16 year old.I have long stringy blonde hair,natural inch boobs,5'8,curvy and always was always horny,I never had a real reason but .He was 36,black hair and muscular.I never thought of my dad(Tyler) in a sexual way,but with him,anything is possible....

I finished changing into my swimsuit as my dad walked in "Hey can we talk/" I nodded "Mhm" I said sitting on my bed and looked at him as he leaned against the wall "Are you and Andy okay?" I blushed and looked at the floor "Yeah,why?" Tyler sighed "Because I heard weird noises last night and I know he was over.What were you doing last night?" I blushed even darker,not ready to tell him I had given my virginity up just last night "We were playing video games" I answered knowing he knew I was lying.

I watched him walk over to me and sit down next to me "Honey,I don't want to make you feel uncomfortable,but don't let him force you into anything you don't want" I looked at him "I wanted it just as much as he does" I whispered.Tyler sighed "Were you safe?" He asked calmly.I nodded "Yes,mom got me birth control to help with my periods" Tyler looked at her "That's good to know" I swallowed hard and stood up "Do you think I look okay?" I asked.Tyler tilted his head "What do you mean?" I looked at him "Well I don't think I look I look normal or even okay" Tyler shook his head and took her hand "Honey you look drop dead gorgeous" He said standing up and looked her over

"You have an amazing body.Personally if you weren't my daughter,I'd love to fuck you" I blushed heavily but looked at him "What's stopping you? I asked softly as I watched my dads face go from shock to lust in a matter of second "You're my daughter and it would be incest.It's wrong" I smirked "So,I'm not going to tell and I know for a fact you wouldn't"

His face was emotionless for a while,no words were said ,which with him means he was thinking hard and was weighing his options.I watched as he put his hands on my waist "You won't tell mom when she gets back?" I shake my head "Of course not" I answered.At that point he leaned down and kissed me softly and a little reluctant,as if to test the waters.I kissed him back more lustful then him,knowing that'd tell him it was okay

I felt him pick me up and lay me down on the bed,he reached under me and untied my bikini top,I watched as he pulled it off and threw it in the floor.He pulled his lips away and kiss my neck then suck on my tits.I moaned softly and ran my hands threw is hair.I shook my head.I knew this was so wrong but it felt so good,I wanted more and more.I put my hands on top of his jeans and worked at his button of his jeans

Tyler laughed "Impatient?" He teased.I shook my head "Nope just want to see your cock" I answered and pulled them down and gripped his cock and stroked it slowly "Mmm so we have about thirty minutes before mom gets back" I watched him pull my bikini bottoms down and rub my pussy slowly "Hmm then we'll make this a quickie till next time" I nodded and pulled his shirt off and kissed him "Mkay" I answered and let go of his cock.I pushed him on his back and started to suck his cock deep and long strokes,knowing I was doing good by his groans.I slowly deep throated him then pulled up and started to suck him more and more.I felt his hands on my,pulling me up to me and kissing me lustfully as I felt him do something different and not what I was expecting.

I watched as he sucked on my tits again then without so much as a warning he thrusted his thick and hard cock into my pussy.I gasped and moaned,gripping his shoulder "H-how big are you?" I asked breathless.He chuckled "Eight inches" He answered thrusting harder and deeper

I moaned again "Mmm I love it" I whispered pushing my hips into his and bit my lip hard.He had his eyes closed and I was in heaven,I felt my pussy tightening and gripping his cock it felt good and I wanted more after this.I watched him groan in pleasure "You're so tight" He whispered tilting his head and his face became a distorted look of pleasure and amazement.I felt myself starting to cum hard against him when sent him over the edge like he wanted.We moaned loud at the same time and I arched my back in amazement

He laid down heavily next to me breathing heavy "Damn" He whispered.I nodded "I know" I said just as breathless .I curled against him and looked at him "Definitely a do again" I smiled as he chuckled "Given,your mom never gives me any,so you will be a good fix" I smiled "Gladly" I answered and closed my eyes.

I had probably fallen asleep because when I woke up my dad was gone and I could hear my mom downstairs talking with him.I stood up and walked into the bathroom taking a shower then got dressed and headed downstairs

I smiled at my mom "How'd it go?" I asked,I watched as she smiled "Same ole same ole.Mrs Johnson's having another baby" I gaped "Another?!She had like four now five" She nodded "I know,personally that woman shoulda learned to keep her legs shut tight"

anonymous readerReport

2012-09-17 15:42:27
Sorry but it was really bad :,(

anonymous readerReport

2012-07-13 18:53:29
i was just getting wet when it ended. more, write more, details and feelings. but good start.

anonymous readerReport

2012-07-13 10:18:41
Personally, I think your story sucks.


2012-07-12 17:29:04
This story was put together way to quickly, at the beginning we had no great structure of the characters. Horrible, not something I would tend on reading. Negative Rating.

anonymous readerReport

2012-07-12 14:17:39
It's a good premise, but you've got a long way to go. Notable errors:

1: Proper punctuation. Try to use the right punctuation marks. ? instead of /, etc.

2: Spacing. Many of your sentences run together. Always put a space after a period. It's kind-of a sticking point.

3: Timing. You've got a good story idea, and the lead-in is solid, but when you get to the action, it's over much too quickly. Describe more. Describe how he moves against her, how she moans in his ear. Add more banter and dialog, even if it's just them talking dirty to each other.

Like I said, you've got a good idea, but you need to work on the proper execution.

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