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From the first day I saw her in the nude
I knew she would be mine
The sexiness she did exude
Made me want to take her from behind

It started on a normal day
But she hit me like a twister
That I’d want this girl in everyway
And that she is my sister

She was coming out the shower
And I into the bathroom
I could’ve stood there for hours
Staring at her body, that was in full bloom

She seemed in a state of shock
And I just gaze upon her body
The slowly rose my cock
Standing at attention to this hottie

She did not neglect my obvious interest
And began to inhale my dick
One hand on her breast
And the other on her slit

I was in a world of pleasure
And tried to make it last
And gazed upon my treasure
Then slapped her juicy ass

I made her stop
And took a seat
And put her on top
Of my meat

She tried to ride it instantly
But struggled a bit
And though she tried ambitiously
It didn’t seem to fit

So used my fingers to open her
And with a little persistence
I made her moan and purr
And we were fucking in an instant

She was riding me like a pro
And taking all my cock
Then I was about to blow
So I told her to stop

She got on her knees
And swallowed all I had to offer
I was clearly pleased
Then began to get softer

She smiled and got dressed
Then flashed me her behind
She said, “I’m really impressed,
I can’t wait until next time.”

anonymous readerReport

2013-02-26 09:37:00
it once (the consequence of those spkoen words live on in OIAL infamy!) and participation in three previous rides bear out the truthfulness of that fateful proclamation. These rides go beyond expectations because they involve the best of riders (despite what they actually ride); awesome scenery and roads; and enough trash-talkin, testosterone fueled exaggerations, and unfounded embellishment of past accomplishments without the need to include inconvenient and bothersome truths.Bullit Boys ride on!

anonymous readerReport

2012-08-10 04:05:18
well writen and well composed. the subject matter is the problem.the incest angle is over used and trite.

anonymous readerReport

2012-08-09 15:38:08
Fuck so sad,do any1 of u hv chair in ur bathroom,funny store,buahahaha.

anonymous readerReport

2012-08-09 07:30:12
Very nice lad. Sort of reminds me of some of the hippie poets back in the '60s in San Francisco. Whatever, keep up the good work.

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