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Me and my sister at Christmas

The blinding light seeped through the blinds and into my eyes. It was Friday 21st December and for those of you who don't know, the world hasn't ended. I sluggishly walked to the bathroom and ran a shower.

The warm water cascaded over my defined chest, a friend a few years my senior helped me workout and transformed my body. I stepped out of the shower and dried off.

"Oliver Leo is downstairs" shouted my mother.

"Tell him to come up" I said.

"Hey man" said Leo.

Hey, I just gotta get changed quick" I told him.

"So who you gotta buy for?" He asked

"My mom, dad and grandparents are easy, I just don't know what to get Charlotte? I confessed.

"How about a sex toy?" He asked

"Hey that's my sister? " I said

"I'm just saying, you should be tapping ass like that, we're both the hottest and richest guys in school, when was the last time you got a Handjob of a girl that hot?" He asked

"Never...because she's my sister?" I said

"Anyway who's car we taking. Yours or one of mine?" I asked

"Yours" he said.

We walked down the stairs and into the large living space, directly next to the front door.

"Bye mom, I'll see you later" I said

"I'll be back tomorrow morning, I've got to drop some presents off to your aunt Victoria" she said.

We got in my 17th birthday present, a white Audi R8 and drove to the shopping centre. After a few hours of buying gifts, we arrived back home.

"So remember 9:00pm on the dot?" He said

"You want me to pick you up?" I asked

"Na this parties gonna be huge! I wanna make an impression" he said.

I grabbed my gifts from the car and stepped inside. It was a few hours to go until the party, so I thought I would relax.

I laid back into the sofa, and flicked through the various T.V. Shows. I settled on a film and grabbed a glass of water. After about 15 minutes a sex scene popped up. I soon began to imagine sliding my dick into her, I rubbed by hard penis through my jeans, and almost spat out my water when I felt my sisters hot breath on my neck.

"Whatcha doing?" She asked, her usual bubbly self.

"Uh n-nothing?' I gasped, pulling my hand from my lap.

"It didn't look like nothing to me?" She giggled.

"We'll it was" I said.

"Hey your a guy, it's cool?" She said.

"And your brother" I replied.

Her smile somewhat faded, and she looked down to her feet. "Yeah" she Said under her breath

"What? I asked.

"Nothing" and with that a smile creeped across her face and she skipped back up the stairs.

"That was close" I said to myself, as I closed my eyes and fondled my softening penis. I pictured a girl on her knees and sucking my dick, but when she looked up, it was my sister!

My eyes shot open and I pulled my hand away from my Cock.I guessed I was just horny and to take my mind off things I decided on a light workout.

After lifting some free weights I had a quick 5 minute shower, dried and set out some clothes. I went with a white shirt and jeans.

I had just got into my car when my sister came running out to me. "Where are you going?" She asked.

"To a party" I said.

"Can I come?" She asked.

"No" I stated bluntly.

"Please?" She asked.

"Fucks sake, okay just be quick" I said.

She ran into the house and came out wearing some short shorts and a small top. "You know this isn't a pool party right?" I said

"Yeah why?" Asked Charlotte.

"Because your dressed like it fucking is?" I said.

"We'll I would go change but theirs no time?" She said, smiling at me.

I got to the party at a few minutes past 9. I parked in the drive way when Leo came out. "What the fuck is this? He asked.

"Hugo boss why? I said.

"Not that... I mean that? He said, gesturing to Charlotte.

"I thought I made it clear, no under 15's aloud" he asked

"I'm 16 you asshole? Said Charlotte.

"I'm joking, your like my sister to?" He said.

We walked inside the house and grabbed some beers. Leo leaned into my shoulder "did you have to bring your sister? I like her and all, but she's gonna get us zero pussy?" He said.

"Don't worry watch this" I said.

I walked over to the sofa, where a few girls I knew were sitting. "Ariana your looking nice" I said.

"Here to crash the party again Oliver?" Smiled Ariana.

"Not this time, but I need you guys to look after my little sister. I'm sure you'll love her, she's just like you?" I said.

I took my sister, over to the sofa and introduced her to everyone.

"Stay out of trouble and if you need me, come find me" I told her.

Me and Leo stood by the drinks, pointing to various girls and evaluating them.

"Gentlemen, thanks for coming" said Wesley.

"Theirs some pretty fine girls here wes, like we were gonna miss this?" I said.

As the time ticked by, all I could think of was Charlotte. But soon once me and Leo were grinding up against some girls it was all fine. She had her back to me, and was wiggling her ass into my crotch.

"Come on" she took my hand and led me up the stairs, Her pert ass in my face.

She laid on top of me, her tongue searching my mouth. I let my top row of teeth lightly graze her lip, then I sucked on the tip of her tongue. She pulled off her top, a black lacy bra covering her large breasts.

I kissed from her neck to her chest, burying my face into her tits. Suddenly Leo burst through the door, his jeans already off.

"Nice work man respect" he said, holding out a clenched fist.

"Wait that's not... Ariana? Where the fuck is my sister?" I asked.

"Last I saw, off with some guy?" She said.

I jumped out of the bed and down the hall. I walked through the door and true to her word, my sister was laying beneath a guy, his hand on her breasts.

I grabbed him, one hand on his neck, the other on his shoulder and threw him off the bed and onto the floor. The bedroom was directly in front of the stairs, and he rolled down the first two.

He stood up and pulled me down with him. The two of us fell down to the bottom, standing back up fists raised.

I threw one of the hardest punches of my life, which caught him between his nose and cheek, knocking him to the floor. I launched onto his body, throwing devastating punches until his body went limp.

A few guys pulled me off and he regained consciousness 15 seconds or so later. "You touch my little sister again, I'll fucking kill you" I told him, deadly serious.

Charlotte came running down the stairs, only in her bra. "Get in the car" I said.

"No" she said.

"Get in the fucking car" I ordered her.

She got in the car slamming the door shut. The drive home was silent, you could cut the tension with a knife.

As soon as we returned home she went to her room. I let her cool down guessing she'd be down in an hour or so. After close to 3 hours I walked upstairs and opened the door to her bedroom.

"You gonna come downstairs? I asked.

I was met with nothing more than a grunt.

"I did this to protect you" I said.

"From what? I'm 16 now I can do what I like?" She said.

"Guys like that just want to use you.Your first time should be special, with someone you love" I Said.

"Yours wasn't? Your always out at parties, having sex and taking advantage of girls." She said.

"My first time was with someone I loved. I was 15, we'd been going out for 2 years, even brought her home once" I said.

"What I'm trying to say, is it should be with someone you love" I said .

"Like who?" She asked.

"Someone who loves you, who looks out for you, who thinks only about you?" I said.

"So are you gonna come downstairs, I've got pizza and that new film you wanted to see? I asked.

"Yes" she said.

I took her in my arms and kissed her. "You remember when we used to wrestle, and whoever lost got kissed?" I asked.

It was nice to hear her laughing again "yeah why?" She said.

I picked her up, spun around then threw her back on the bed, pinning her underneath me.

I kissed all over her face time and time again, she giggled uncontrollably "get off" she laughed.

I let her pin me before carrying her downstairs.

"I love you Oliver"

End of part 1

Hey people hope you all had a great Christmas. So this is my first story and although theirs not no real sexual scenes, I just want you guys to tell me if I'm going in the right way. Constructive criticism is very welcome and I want to know if you like it and if you don't why you didn't? Maybe the story is unrealistic or I started off too quick. Also I had problems with not including enough speech, but now I think I've included to much.

If you do want another part, it should start to get a lot more sexual and I do tend to include a lot of detail when describing said scenes. Once again hope you've had a merry Christmas .

P.S. if incest is not your cup of tea (and yes this story is about incest, for those who haven't read the theme, theirs always one!) I will be writing some more stories, but since theirs so many incest texts, I figured that's what a lot of you guys liked to read. Goodbye and thank you.

anonymous readerReport

2013-01-14 14:12:35
way to rushed and dumb slow down and build some plot and devlope your characters. delete this series and rewrite it adding the needed background and slowing down the action. you also need a good editor.

anonymous readerReport

2013-01-02 15:06:20
You could stand a review of the use of words like 'their' and 'there'. You are murdering it. This is not an English class. I like the story but you did ask for any criticism.

anonymous readerReport

2013-01-01 13:44:50
this is based on tv series revenge? names an story match a bit lol

anonymous readerReport

2012-12-31 15:17:06
When is the next part going to be uploaded I can't wait for the next part

anonymous readerReport

2012-12-31 02:12:26
Love it can't wait for the next part

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