A/N: I know it’s terrible but just bear with me, it’s my first story. Please comment!

As fourteen year old Melanie Wilson walked through the door into her two story house, she was met with silence. She sighed and hurriedly ran up the stairs to her room. She quickly closed the door and angrily removed her heavy backpack off her shoulders. She didn’t understand how her parents could be getting a divorce, it just didn’t make sense at all. She felt tears rushing and she did the one thing she rarely did and that was cry.

She fell asleep and soon woke up to a loud banging on the front door. Fear immediately settled in her but she pushed it aside as she arrived to door with a baseball bat in her hands. She opened the door to see her Uncle Nestor. She threw the baseball seat aside and gave her uncle a very big hug.

“Oh, hey Uncle Nestor. I didn’t know it was you,“ She lead him to the living room and watched as he took a seat.

“I just wanted to check up on you, y’know? It’s been so long and everything. I heard about your parents divorcing and sweetheart, it’s going to be okay,” He said soothingly.

Tears reflowed into her eyes and she quickly turned her head to the side so that he couldn’t see that she wanted to cry. “I’ll be right back, Uncle Nestor.”

As Melanie walked away, Nestor couldn’t help but notice her cute little bubble butt. It had been a long time since he had had sex with someone ever since Debbie, his wife, passed away. He felt the usual stirrings in his loins but tried to push them back. This was his niece, for god’s sake! He shouldn’t be feeling what he was feeling and shame quickly took him over.

Melanie found something comfortable to wear and shut the door to her bedroom, wondering when her dad would get home. It was already seven and he was always back by six. She shook her head to push the worry away and focused on spending some quality time with her uncle. It was true that it had been a long time since she had last seen him.

She turned on the television and took a seat right next to him with a considerable amount of distance between them. Her eyes were glued to the screen, but her mind really wasn’t. And for some reason, she thought her uncle was slowly moving her way.

“If your thinking about when your dad is coming back, he told me had a business meeting and will be coming back in two days,” He said casually.

“Oh, well thanks for telling me.”

An hour and a half passed and the pair were still seated on the living room sofa with Melanie’s uncle’s thighs pressed against hers. Melanie felt uncomfortable being seated so close to him but didn’t scoot over as she considered that rude and horribly mean.

“So Mel, how’s school?” His left arm was now around her shoulders as the thought of scooting over came back.

“It’s fine, my grades are really good.”

“Wow! That’s amazing.”

Silence came over them once more as they sat calmly for another hour. Now, Melanie was used to her uncle’s arm around her and even snuggled into his touch. Boy, was he warm.

“Hey, Mel, can I ask you something?”

“Have you ever been kissed?” He felt her rested eyes open to peer into his brown ones.

“No, why?”

“So you’ve never thought about what it would feel like?” He asked, his breath ghosting over her face.

“Yeah, I’ve wondered about it,” She admitted.

“Would you mind if I gave you one, hmm, Mel?” Nestor was really pushing his limit.

Melanie shot up and looked at him with wide eyes. “But, Uncle, we’re not supposed to do that.”

“No, it’s okay. You love me, don’t you?”

“Yes, I do. You’re my uncle.”

“And I love you, too. You know what two people who love each other do?”

“They have sex.” She blatantly said.

His hand skirted down to her chest and gave one of her boobs a squeeze. “Yeah, you got the point, sweetheart.”

She yelped and tried pushing him away. “No, we’re related so we’re not supposed to be together. Look, this is wrong and what if someone finds out?”

Hope rose in Nestor as he kissed Melanie’s forehead and said, “Nobody’s gonna find out, sweetheart. I promise.”

He returned back to squeezing her tits while giving her an assuring kiss. She responded anxiously and Nestor moved his attention to the other breast. He pressed his luck by going south and landed on the treasure between her legs before she hastily removed his hand from there.

“Sweetheart, remember what I told you. Don’t worry, I promise.” He tried reassuring her as she gave him a nervous look.

He massaged her pussy through her capri and quickly reached for the waistband of them. He removed them without any hassle and soon removed her underwear. The only thing that was missing was her t-shirt and bra. He pulled it over her head and unhooked her bra in record time.

Nestor felt like the luckiest man alive.

He lowered himself on his knees and could smell her arousal. It smelled heavenly and he buried his nose in the hairy forest of her pussy. He knew she was a virgin, hell if she hadn’t been kissed, there was no way in hell she had been fucked. He couldn’t wait to pop her cherry and have his hot juices flow through her. Nestor got his middle finger and ran it up and down the opening of her slit. She was indeed wet and he soon cut to the chase and started eating her out.

“Hmm, Uncle, it feels weird, but a good kind of weird,” He heard her moan out into the air.

Nestor felt the pressure in his dick and he was sure his nine inch cock was laced with pre cum. He removed his faded jeans and t-shirt. He got a hold of his dick and ran it along her slick folds.

“Uh, uncle are you sure that thing is gonna fit in me?”

Nestor ignored her question as he thrusted his long girth into her tight channel as she releashed a scream he’d never heard. He quickly thrusted in and out of her, not really paying much attention to her pain and discomfort. Nestor was on a whole different planet as all that mattered were how he was feeling. He removed his painfully hard cock and ran it up and down her pussy. He relished in the fact that he popped her cherry as he saw his dick covered in her bright red blood. He could hear her crying and he scooted above, shushing her with his kisses.

“Baby, did it hurt that bad? It’s gonna be alright, don’t cry.” Her tears flowed down like snowflakes as her hot canal continued milking his dick.

Nestor was annoyed with her relentless crying and moved faster, feeling himself about to cum. He could hear how his testicles slapped against that bubble butt of hers and saw how blood was leaking down her thighs. It hit him and loads of his cum shot into her newly explored pussy, his eyes closed in ecstasy. He removed his semi hard dick and watched how his cum leaked out of her very red cunt.

It was a beautiful sight, he thought.

Their so called lovemaking session happened the before they went to sleep and in the shower. Nestor knew he would never get tired of hearing his name on Melanie’s tongue as she cummed over and over.

Anonymous readerReport

2014-01-01 02:18:33
the best thing you can do is delete it and stop writing you suck at it.

anonymous readerReport

2013-06-30 02:37:19
needs lots of work'!


2013-06-04 09:52:57
Not too bad for your first. Now, SLO DOWN, more detail, more interaction between the subject's. Proof read your story several times while rereading it and then one final time before publishing it. You have the right idea, and your flow is good for a starter. You will do fine. Good Luck !!

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