All Comments Appreciated
I have just started writing these poems,
These words keep cuming, they just flow,
Any comments, positive or negative,
I would appreciate so I can continue to grow.
Your Feedback means a lot to me,
Please Go back and read a Drickfield previous post,
Feel free to share your comments,
Which one's you like least, and which ones the most.
I am not afraid of criticism,
I have a hard shell,
That goes for my feelings,
My private parts as well.
The more you tell me what you like,
The more I can aim to please,
Nothing better than pleasing you with my sex or my poems,
And making you weak in the knees
The more that you tell me,
The more for you I will write,
So that you have a smile on your face, and a tingle in your groin,
And So that your spirit takes flight.
Maybe I should come up with a system,
Maybe 1,2,3, or 4 Boner,(/,//,///, or ////),
Its all for the growing,
Of the Boner's Owner.
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