This is my first time writing a erotic story. Please tell me if it's good and critic the writing please. More chapters will come soon. Enjoy the story :)
I didn’t know where I was or who I was with. Then it hit me. I was interrogated, raped, then now cuffed naked on a lonely table. What the fuck happened? One day I was boring Amy, thinking she was going through a phrase. But then, everything changed after I received a package. Before any horrible thing happened, a month ago before any of this shit. I began to change and I regretted it.
“Derek we need to talk.” I said while cleaning the dishes. Derek glare with a smile on his face. Derek is my best friend I decided to move in with. I been living with him for about approximately five months. I felt lonely in my apartment, and I needed someone to company me. Derek was the one who volunteered since all the other girls were annoying. I felt like one of the guys instead of those slutty skimpy girls. Shopping always every fucking day, fuck strangers they don’t know and shit like that. The truth is that I was the weirdo. The girl who rather wear jeans that were tight but I mean like skinny jeans, shirts that don’t show much as cleavage, or not at all and wears converses all the time since I love sneakers.
Anyways, Derek sauntered toward me. Before reaching me he ceased, and stood glaring at me with the same cute smile he always had since fourth grade. “What’s wrong Amy?” I stopped washing the last dish, and turned to look at him. His eyes so intriguing, crystal eyes, beautiful small lips, greek nose, his skin tan so perfectly, and his body so fit and muscular. Reach about 6’0 ft. Shirtless, with jeans and no shoes. I’ll melt all over him.
Thinking of it makes me wonder how big his penis is if he is so perfect. I was already getting wet just guessing how large his penis size was. I heard his voice again which drew me to his eyes, which now looked as if he was worried. “Are you okay Amy?”
“Yes I am I just need to talk to you….if you’re not busy?”
“I’m not really. I just called my job that I would not go in today nor tomorrow. Thanksgiving is more important since it is tomorrow.”
“How did she feel?”
“Oh Amy, don’t worry about Cheng. Cheng was kinda upset, but she accepted it. She is sometimes a bitch, but a hot, stubborn, slutty bitch.” I hate when he rumbles about how fucking hot his boss is and how much he wanted to eat her pussy out, hear her moan his name while clawing his skin, or how much he wanted to slide his dick inside her pussy and fuck her senseless until she cries for mercy. I guess being one of the boys really makes things awkward for me. Since guys always converse about sex to each other. I wonder if Derek ever told how hot I was to his employers….or his boss?
“Derek I got a question….I want to know if you’re alright with me asking it?”
He cocked his head a bit to the right side and squinted. “Sure.”
“Have you ever had a feeling? A feeling like you’re not yourself?”
“What are you talking about Amy?”
“Like….you feel like life is a detour. Like you can’t do anything different.”
“I can’t comprehend what your saying Amy?”
“I think I’m moving back to my apartment.” His eyes widen in shock.
“Have I done something?”
“No, it’s not that. I don’t know. I feel….weird.” He approach closer to me.
“What do you mean?”
“I don’t know. I guess it’s a phrase. I feel like nothing. Tonight I feel like going online to dropping out. I feel like moving back in my apartment. I feel like doing nothing. I feel like my compassion drained away and my motivation is falling apart. I feel….different.”
“I guess it’s normal. Do you feel….lazy?”
“I guess so. I don’t even feel like cleaning this last dish to be honest.”
He downcast his eyes, sadden. I touch his cheek. “Derek I’m so sorry, but I got to do this. I’ll be alright.”
I left the dish by itself. I walked toward my bedroom as Derek walked in with me. Ocean blue wall paint with in the tippy top white stripes all across the four walls. My small off white bed with black sheets face toward the door. My mirror on the right corner near the closet, and my TV across the bed near the door. Yeah, my room is really boring. Derek looked at me and said, “Amy….when did you begin to feel that way?”
“I don’t remember. I’m guessing four weeks ago.”
“Really? Why haven’t you told me?”
“Maybe because I was embarrassed at first, but then I thought it’ll go away. I guess it never did. I’m fine okay. You can go now. I’ll lay down and maybe I’ll feel a bit better.”
“Okay.” Before he walked away. I spoke again. “Can you please lock the door behind you.”
I guess that let him off guard since I never locked my door, or even close it ever.
“Okay.” As he did, I went near the mirror, staring at my reflection. “Am I pretty?” I stare at my body. Curves, C+ breasts, round yet small ass. I had a nice body. My eyes jaded, my nose small perky, my lips small and juicy, my face heart shaped. “I guess so.” Now my self-esteem feels low. What’s wrong with me? Why am I feeling this way? I removed my shirt and stare at my bra. 42C. Blue polka dots. I slowly took out the left strap. Slowly seeing my breast emerge. My left breast emerge out the bra. So round and perfect. I was getting horny staring on my reflection. I started to remove my other strap and then I’m staring at my own bare breasts. I removed my bra completely. “Fuck they're so juicy looking.” I started to tease my left breast. Pinching my nipple. I felt a little string. I never touch myself. I mean when I take a shower because I had to clean them, but I mean touch myself. Like….masturbating. I kept pinching my nipple with my left hand while my right bounced my right breast. Touching both my breast made me wet. I never felt this wet. For the first time, I felt horny. Horny touching myself. I remove my pants. My boy shorts. I saw a wet spot. I was drenching. I bit my lip. Oh.My.God. I’m so fucking horny. What phrase am I going through? I took my right hand and lower it down my thigh. Still biting my lip, I moved away from the mirror, and back up until I felt the wall.
“So fucking horny.” I moaned out. For a beginner, I felt like a expert of pleasuring myself. I slowly touch my thigh and reach to my inner thigh. Up and down slowly and sensitive. My skin so sensitive. I cease my pinching of my left nipple as I saw it was harden. I began to pinch and twirl my right nipple. My right hand finally reach my pussy lips. Oh God, I was a river down there. I never thought my pussy would be that wet. It’s storming pussy juices. “Oh fuck me finger.” I moaned again. As I kept playing with my right breast. My right hand slide my shorts down and I began to touch my Clitoris. I screech a moan. “OOOO!” I cover my mouth automatically. I don’t want Derek walking in on me masturbating. I stood silent for a minute. He never approach the door. I uncover my mouth and look at myself. What was I doing? Masturbating. Look at me. Naked, fucking my nipples and pussy. Oh God, what fucking phrase is this shit! I can’t help it. I’m so fucking horny. Maybe once and that’s it. I open my legs wide enough for the shorts to cease it. My right hand rubbed the Clitoris in circular motion. “Oooo fuck yes, I want to be finger fuck so hard right now. Mmmm, yes baby.” I slide one finger in. Oooo I never thought my vagina wall was so tight. I never thought being a virgin was being tight like a sewing machine sew my hymen. I finger slowly as I play with my breasts, bouncing, shaking, pinching, also licking them. Mmmmm so good. I kept finger fucking while my thumb circle my Clitoris. I bit my lip seductively. I was enjoying myself. Entertaining my body. “Fuck!” I insert a second finger. Fucking myself. Moaning every inch of pleasure rushing through me. I went faster and faster. Moaning almost loud enough for the neighbors to hear me. I collapse on the floor. Hard orgasm. I climax. I fucking climax for the first time. That was a fucking achievement.
My floor was a bit wet. A pool of pussy juice. Curiosity hitted me. My wet juicy fingers needed to be clean. I sucked them clean. Mmmm. I wonder why guys like eating pussies so much. It’s so fucking delicious. Next to me on the floor was a shirt that my dad gave me that I despised. I grabbed the shirt, and clean my pussy juice on the floor. I threw the shirt under my bed. And got on my PJs. It was a red plaid shirt with black shorts. My gut spoke. Check on Derek. So, I sneak out my room. Already 10pm. Wow. How long was I masturbating? It felt short. I tiptoed past the bathroom and went near his room. I heard moans. I peek a bit. My eyes widen. When did he brought a girl in the fucking house? I open a little crack to see enough of what was going on. A girl bouncing up and down.
“Oh fuck yes Derek. Fuck the shit out of me baby!”
“Shut the fuck up Kim! You’ll wake up Amy.”
Derek is fucking my cousin. He’s fucking my slut of a cousin. Kim was always a slut. Fuck almost every hot guy from the neighbourhood since Kim is hot. Kim have wavy brunette hair, high cheekbones, perky nose, full size lips, and thin eyebrows. Her body was not better than mines though. Her body was curvy, but her breast were B-, her ass wasn’t too round, but not saggy either. I saw a glimpse of Derek’s dick. Wow amazing. So thick and long. It looked as if it was 9 inches. Wow so big. And Kim is bouncing on it. Her hips swaying with the rhythm, his hands hold each side of her waist, lifting her up and down as she ride his dick like a rodeo.
“Oooo fuck Derek. Fuck me like a fucking slut I am. Call me a slut Derek. Call me a fucking slut!”
“You’re a fucking slut! A fucking horny slut! You love having your slutty pussy fucked! You fucking cunt!”
“Oooo like that baby!”
“Shut up bitch! Take my cock inside your fucking slutty ass!”
“Oooo yes!” She turned around facing the door. I stop looking for a moment then glare back at the crack door. Her eyes closed. Her B- breast bouncing crazy, Her mouth open as she moan loudly. “Ooooo fuck that dirty ass you fucking bastard.”
I heard a loud clapped. Did he just slap her ass?
“You little cunt! Shut the fuck up and just keep on riding.”
“Oooo yes baby!”
The clap of her ass and his dick got louder, and her face got red. Is she reaching orgasm?
“Oooo fuck! I’m going to fucking cum!” My pussy was getting wet. Oh imagine fucking Derek cock like Kim was doing. I put my right hand down my shorts and started to rub my clit. Mmmm his voice, her moans, their fucking making me so wet. I bit my lip while playing with myself. Derek pounding hard on Kim’s dirty little slutty ass.
As she climax, I climax and by mistake hit the door wide open. They both got up to see me on the floor.
“What the fuck!” Kim covered herself with his red sheet.
“Oh my God Amy!”
“Did Amy just saw us fucking Derek?”
I got up embarass. He looked down to see that my hand was still inside my shorts.
I ran to my room. As I ran I locked the door to then hear a thump on the door. He was chasing me? “Amy I can explain.”
“No it’s fine! Kim is not surprising, but you?”
“Well can I ask you the same?”
“I was itching on my inner thigh okay.”
“Stop lying Amy.”
“Babe can we finish fucking.”
“Kim just leave we finish tomorrow.”
“Oh come on.”
“Get the fuck out okay.”
I heard silence for five minutes then a slam appeared. I guess she was that angry. “Open the door Amy.”
“And why’s that Amy.”
“I….I don’t know.”
“Just open the door. I swear I’m not naked.” I thought for a minute, then got up and unlock the door, and went back to my bed.
“See Amy.” He was half-right, he got only his boxers on.
“You’re still naked to me.”
“Oh come on Amy.”
“Look I’m sorry that I was spying on you. I wanted to see if you were okay.”
“I’m guessing masturbating watching me fuck your cousin was me being okay.”
“Shut the fuck up.”
“Look I’m sorry. I guess me leaving to my old apartment is a good idea.”
“Amy don’t say that.”
“What do you want me to say? You fuck my cousin.”
“You watch me fuck her. What do you want to say about that?”
“I don’t have any explanation with it.”
He went closer and felt something sticky on the side. Shit I didn’t clean that little piece. He looked up at me.
“Amy you masturbated? Is this the reason why you told me to lock the door?”
“Derek maybe it was a lollipop that fell there.”
“No it’s not Amy. That is pussy juice. Why were you masturbating?”
“Why are you asking me all those fucking questions?”
“Amy….you’re acting so different.”
“No I’m not.”
Derek went on my bed and sat next to me.
“Derek please let’s drop this.” Derek smirk.
“What were you thinking of?”
“Be honest, we’re buddies remember. Plus, you watch me fuck so I would like to know what you did as a return.”
I deeply inhale and exhale and told him. “I was staring at myself at the mirror. I was taking off my clothes and I got carried away ok.”
“Okay. I took off my bra and started to touch my breast.” His hand touch my right breast. “Like this.” I hit his hand. “Don’t fucking do that!”
“C’mon. You watch me fuck your cousin, while masturbating. For punishment I have to touch you.”
“Derek please don’t I’m sorry. You don’t need to do this.”
“Amy.” I downcast my eyes. I heard him fuck Kim. He’s too dominating. I never seen Derek like that. “Okay.”
“Good. Describe the masturbating you had Amy.”
“I-I pinched my left nipple.” He buttoned my shirt, taking the shirt off. He was amaze about my breasts. His right hand pinch my nipple as I moan a bit. “Like this?"
“Yes.” I moaned.
“What else?” I hesitated for a moment, but gain myself. “I-I then touch my right breast, bouncing it up and down.” He used his other hand. Bouncing my breast up and down while his other hand pinch and twirl my left nipple. He’s reacting my performance earlier. I moaned softly in each breath.
“Can we stop?”
“No, not until you’re fully filled.”
“Derek you don’t have to do this. I learned my lesson.”
“Until fully filled Amy. You didn’t finish orgasming when you interrupted my good fucking.”
“Derek.” I said out of breath.
“I’m just going to masturbate you….that’s all.”
“Dere-”He shh my lips.
“Your fine Amy. What else?”
“I-I took off my pants and started to caress my thigh until I reach to my inner thigh.”
He reacted the scenario. His was better though. My skin jumped when he caress my thigh as he started to lick on my left nipple then suck it and repeated it on the both nipples. My moans got louder. “Ooow fuck. I started to rub my clit.” He smiled and pulled down my shorts to see my unshaved pussy. My face turned red in embarrassment. “Don’t worry Amy. I’ve seen worst.”
“Oooo….wrong person sweetie.” He started to rub my clitoris. I started to touch my breast. Pull on them, lick them, suck them, repeatedly. “Fuck Derek, yes! Fuck yes! Like that!” I moaned out. His smirk so pure. His finger went inside me as he lower his face and started to lick my clitoris in circular motion, while still finger fucking me. My body glowed in red as I moan in every second and pound I felt through my body. “Derek.” I breathed. “Fuck….Derek.”
“C’mon Amy, keep with the rhythm.” He inserted another finger. I arched my back moaning louder. That second finger was rough. “Derek will I lose my virginity like this?”
“Heaven no. Only a cock can do that.” I grabbed the sheets tightly. “Oooo fuck yes Derek!”
His tongue so wet circling my clitoris. Then my eyes widen, I can feel his teeth, teething my clitoris. I moan in excitement. Oh God I never thought being eaten out was so wonderful. “Derek….don’t stop Derek!” His two fingers pounding every second, hard and fast as his mouth suck, lick and teeth my clitoris. My hands still playing with my breasts. He slowed down. My body still horny. I was getting upset. “Why did you slow? I was in the verge to cum.”
“Sorry, but I want to teach you something new.”
“What is it?”
He pulls out his dick. His dick was bigger than I ever imagine. Oh my fucking God. His dick was 10 inches. That is a monster cock.
“No!” I push him off.
“I’m not going to put that in me!”
“No! I’m not doing that Amy.”
“What the fuck are you going to do? Put it in my fucking mouth!”
“Yes.” My eyes widen. “How can it fit in my mouth?”
“I’ll teach you. I’m going to keep fingering you as you suck my dick, you understand.”
I stare at his cock. Hesitating for a while now. He repeated the last line. “You understand?”
“Okay.” He stood up and came out the bed.
“Get out your bed.”
I follow his command. I got out my bed and stood upright staring at him, nervously.
“Kneel down.” I kneel down slowly and gently. He put down his boxers. Seeing his balls and large cock.
“C’mon. Touch it.” I stare for a minute, then with my index finger touch his tip quick. I pull back as it bounce a bit. He chuckled. “You are definitely a pure virgin.”
“I’m a bit naughty.”
I grab hold of his dick, then slowly rub up and down jerking him. His head tilt back in gladness. He was content to see me like this I guess. Knowing your friend almost all your life to then end up letting her jerk you off. Of course you’ll be glad. His arm was long enough to reach my pussy. He continued back fingering me, but with only one finger for now.
“Fuck. Amy you’re doing great for a beginner.”
“Now lick my tip.”
I started to lick his tip in circular motion while still jerking him. His face was in joy as I multitask on his dick. While he fingers me. Excitement jolted through my body. I felt his second finger inserted inside me.
“Suck my dick now.”
“I don’t know if I can.”
“I’ll tell you ok.”
“Okay.” I lean in and started to bit by bit take his tip of his penis. Was I really going to suck this whole thing? I think my head will explode before I reach his whole dick.
“Like that. Bit by bit Amy.” I started to gulped as much as possible. His two fingers were already consuming my pussy juice. Finally after eight minutes swallowing bit by bit of his cock, I finally deepthroat his cock. “Yes Amy! OOOOO Yes!” His head thrown back as he moaned. I can’t believe we are doing this.
Derek fingers me while I deepthroat his cock. All this because I witness Derek fucking my cousin Kim. It feels so wrong yet so right. I’m deepthroating my best friend as he finger fucks my virgin pussy. I kept with the rhythm. Fellating him, going up and down. Everything spinned. His two fingers fucking hard as his thumb rubs my clitoris faster. My mouth back and forth on his dick. Finally I achieve orgasm. “Aaaaaaa!” Seconds after I orgasm. He yells, “I going to fucking cum. In your mouth or tits?”
“I guess Inside my mouth.”
"Don't fucking guess Amy....just tell me! I'm close!"
"In my mouth."
After four minutes he busted inside my mouth. I felt a huge load of cum flowing down my mouth. Some bits spill on my breast. Wow. Best foreplay ever. And first. But slowly I started to feel depress for some reason. Boring Amy was appearing. Why am I feeling this way? He lift his boxers up while I finished swallowing the last drop of cum inside my mouth.
“Amazing Amy. You were good for your first time….Amy?”
I was crying. I guess Derek felt guilty.
“Amy? Are you alright?”
“I don’t fucking know. I don’t know why I feel like a fucking whore.”
“You’re not Amy.” The old Derek came back, but in the wrong fucking time.
“I just fucking perform oral fucking sex on you while you finger fuck my tight fucking pussy….which feels fucking sore.”
“Amy….I’m sorry….I am sometimes rough.”
“Sometimes, you’re fucking dominate. You fucking insert your fingers roughly inside my pussy, you fuck Kim like a dirty slut she is, you teeth my clitoris. What else can I fucking say? I’m not my fucking self no more. I’m fucking boring Amy.”
“Amy maybe you need some sleep.”
I calmed down, then inhaled deeply. “Maybe.” He gives back my shirt and my shorts.
“It’s okay, I’ll take a shower then I’ll get dress.”
“Are you sure?”
“Yes I’m sure.”
His dick is already clean, because I only had to lick them clean. I actually have to take a shower in order to be clean. I went out my room, leaving Derek hanging there, and went to the bathroom. I found a clip on the counter. I put up my hair. I was already naked so I went inside the shower and put on the warm water. I Wash myself. Grabbed the soap, started to rub on my neck for a minute then work my way down to my breast, I soaped my breasts in circular motion until I reach the nipples, which I just dab it twice. I work on the sides which was the arms and the armpits. I work my way down to my legs. Smoothing my legs in a up and down motion. Finally, my pussy. I sat down the tub, and open my legs wide. I started to rub the soap on my clitoris to near my hole. I let the water wash off the soap on my pussy. I was getting horny again as the water hitted my clitoris. I force myself to not masturbate. I didn’t need it today after all that happen. After I was done, I wash away the rest of the soap that was left. Turn off the shower, grabbed the towel, and went to my room. Derek was already gone. I went to my closet and put on my clean shorts, and plaid shirt. Let down my red hair and went to my bed, and went straight to sleep.