This is my first story, so I'd love some constructive criticism
Me and the Snowbunny on a Road trip: Chapter 1
My name is Rod, I'm 17 and I love to ski. I grew up in Vermont. There isn't always a lot of snow and the skiing season isn't very long. But I always made the most of it.
I started when I was about four years old and have been shredding ever since. Although my parents weren't the biggest fans of the sport, I had some great friends to hang out with. We'd always do our shenanigans out on the mountain, like smoke ganj and drink, and just have a good time.
Sometimes I'd separate from the group for a bit and hang out with my friend Sierra. Sierra was a cute 5'5 brunette with a killer set of tits and hair like a waterfall. But what really sold her was her ass. She was really skinny and was on the varsity cross country team so it was perfectly shaped. Sierra loved to ski too and was always bugging me to ditch my friends and come with her, even though I was a lot more skilled than her and easily passed her out. I, more often than not, agreed, because ass. I never made a move though, because I was always scared of losing our friendship, and I think she was too, so nothing really happened between us....Until spring break during senior year.
Sierra, some of my friends and I decided to take a road trip out west for some big mountain powder skiing. We packed up two cars; one with all of my friends and our skis, and another with just Sierra and I, and all our bags. We were put together because I was the only one she was really comfortable with for a long trip.
"Aaaaaand we're off!" She exclaimed as I backed my jeep out of her driveway, following my friends SUV. She reached over and hugged me. She held it out a little long and I think I could barely feel her rubbing her tits up against me. I didn't think too much of it and continued driving.
"This is already fucking awesome." I said. We were both pretty excited, and I was already daydreaming about her tight little body right next to me. We sat speechless for about an hour and my horny self couldn't stop thinking about her. Probably because we were going to be alone in my jeep for a few days. My dick started getting hard and I was praying she wouldn't notice. I tried covering it up, but it was too hard of a task while driving.
"Are you ok?" She asked.
"Yeah, I'm fine. Just a little bored." I noticed her staring at my lap out of the corner of my eye. 'Fuck. She sees it.' I thought to myself. I could feel my face getting as red as a Rodato.
"Bored? Well in that case, why don't we not be bored?" She said.
"Not be bored? Alright... How would we do that?"
"Well, I couldn't help but notice you were having a little trouble down there," she pointed to my crotch.
"Oh, yeah, uhh, sorry about that. It just happens sometimes."
"Yeah, sure. Sometimes." She gave me a sly smile. I looked at her and saw her grinning right back at me.
"Well let's start off by taking care of that." She slowly reached over and placed her hand on my already hard bulge. I started to panic. Is this actually happening? I'd never done anything with a girl beside make out, so I didn't know what to do.
"You're so big! And so hard! Oh my god." Sierra started slowly stroking my dick through my pants, grabbing and squeezing every now and then.
"I really don't know if you should do this right now, I'm driving." I told her.
"Don't worry, just keep your eyes on the road and I'll do all the work. I bet it's really uncomfortable trapped in these jeans." She was right, it was painful. She kept rubbing me while I looked where I was driving. I heard my jeans unzip and belt become undone. I looks down to find her looking back up at me. I knew what she was trying to tell me. I lifted my hips up so Sierra could yank down my pants and boxers. My 7 inch cock flew up and hit her chin. She gasped deeply. I felt her hand wrap around it and move it around, like she was inspecting it. She started to slowly move her hand up and down my shaft, spitting on her palm and smearing it all over my dick. Her warm breath on my skin told me her face was right next to it. I glanced down every so often and was stunned at how sexy she looked. I noticed her other hand had moved from my lap to into her sweatpants. She brought her face closer and opened her mouth up to take me in. Her lips wrapped around the head of my dick and she slowly swirled her tongue around the tip.
"Ughhh" I groaned. Holy shit this was amazing. She hadn't even taken my entire cock in her mouth and I was already thinking about cumming. But I couldn't, not yet. I wanted to let this go for as long as possible.
"Do you like it?" Sierra asked as she took her mouth off me.
"Yeah, Sierra. Keep going." I pushed her head back down and she started sucking me again. This time she pushed as much as she could fit in her mouth. She had about half of it in and I could feel her tongue massaging the underside of my cock as she pulled her head back up and bobbed it down again. Sierra kept sucking me for a minute or two when she pushed her head all the way down to the base. Holy fuck. This is so much better than masturbating. I could feel my dick being squeezed by her throat muscles. I groaned lowly as I felt myself come close to cumming.
"Fuck, Sierra, please don't stop, I'm gonna cum." She didn't stop. She held me inside her throat like a champ, gagging a little bit too. That sent me over the edge, causing me to shoot a huge load down into her belly.
"OHHHHHHH FUUUUUUCK!!!!!!" I screamed. I couldn't stop cumming. Over and over I dumped my hot mess into her mouth. I could feel her gulping it all down, with my dick still all the way down her throat. She slowly took her mouth off me and kissed my dick one last time before sitting back in her own seat.
My phone started to ring. I picked it up. It was my friend Jeff who was in the other car.
"Dude, what's wrong? You're driving all over the road."
"Oh yeah, sorry, I dropped my phone by the gas pedal and was trying to grab it."
"Alright, just making sure you're not already getting drunk without us."
"Nah man, we wouldn't do anything without telling you guys." I glanced over at Sierra. She was laughing quietly.
"We'll stop in a few hours and get something to eat." I said.
"Awesome, sounds like a plan." Jeff replied before hanging up.
"I'm so horny. Mind if I take care of it?" I looked over at Sierra again to see her with her hands down her pants, probably rubbing her pussy.
"Haha, sure. Go ahead." I replied. This road trip is gonna go by too fast.