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this is my first so be gentle
This is my first story I am not the best grammatically but I’ll give it ago. I do have some true stories to tell but I will have a go at fiction first.
This is the story of Paul Dixon I’ll tell you a little about him he’s 16 years old 5’11’’ 200 lbs and built like a brick shit house. He lives with his Emma and Gary Dixon who living in Portland Oregon. They live in a nice 2 bedroom house on the edge of the city. Paul is still in school and just finished freshman year and is working with his dad in forestry while his mum is a stay at home mum.
It was the second week of the holidays when the accident happened Paul and Gary were cutting down trees on the site when a widow maker (falling branch) hits Paul on the leg injuring him badly and getting rushed to hospital. After getting out of hospital he is told to rest and avoid strain on his leg. He is really pissed and post on facebook about just how pissed he is all his friend wish him a speedy recovery apart one of his closest friends Lisa ‘who is a 5’0 16 year old beauty with a full b cup and nice firm ass’ who goes one step farther by showing up at his door.
When the doorbell rings he is sitting in the living room so as fast as possible he gets up and answers the door when he does is shocked to see Lisa standing there and is greeted by her when she says “what kind of dumb ass are you walking around with your leg the way that it is” shocked by her scolding he just babbles “ I had to answer because the door was locked”. Lisa just gave him the sit the fuck down dumb ass look and pointed towards the living room. As they sit down Lisa asks him how it happened and how he was. He tells her how it happened and that he’s in pain but is ok. They talk for 2 or so hours and that’s when it hit Paul not only is lisa his best friend she went out of her way to take 2 buses to come and see him when he’s out of the game. As Lisa is getting ready to leave his mum casual walks in and shouts “Paul you here” . Paul shouts back “in here”. As Emma comes in to see Lisa putting her coat on se asks her “hey Lisa just leaving do you not want to stay for dinner”? Lisa thinks about it for a second or 2 “ I would love to but my last bus is in 10 minutes and I can’t miss it but thanks for the offer” she says with a smile “ well I’ll give you a lift home it’s no problem” Emma say after sitting down and removing her coat. “Well I’ll defo take you up on that offer Mrs Dixon” Lisa says taking her coat back of.
“Why don’t you kids go to Pauls room while I make food and I’ll shout when food is ready” Emma says getting up and making her way into the kitchen. So Paul struggles up in pain and hobbles up to his room followed by Lisa who watches him struggle to climb stairs when they get up stairs and into his room they sit on the bed and turn the TV on for background noise more than anything. As they talk about what they’re planning on doing this summer when out of the blue Lisa say “show me your leg” confused as hell he just looks at her with a look of pure confusion. But before he has the chance to reply she jumps of the bed and grabs the lose shorts he’s wearing and yanks them down it isn’t till there down at his ankles that she sees he’s not got any boxers on and his thick 8 inch cock is in full view. She is so embarrassed by this she turns around and apologises over and over about doing it. When he says “its ok you can turn back around” she turns around and then he breaks into a laughing fit an she just starts to laugh as well.
There sitting and talking for 20 minutes before Emma is calling to say food is ready they rush downstairs which for Paul is more like a shuffle and get food there talking at dinner when Emma asks “what the heck were you to laughing about up there”
They look at each other and think about what to say when Paul give Lisa a nod and she explains what happened. Emma just goes wide eyed for a second then shakes her head and they finish of eating when they finish Paul and Lisa head up stairs back to his room and talk for a while the whole time Lisa just keep thinking about Pauls not so little friend and soon she’s extremely wet. Pauls talking about him missing working and riding his motorbike when she say “ excuse me a minute I need to use the toilet” and rushes of to the bathroom as soon as she gets there she quickly drops her trousers and starts rubbing her clit wildly within seconds she’s cumming hard. Once she recovers she walks back to Pauls room and straight over to him planting a hard right on his lips and tries to invade his mouth with her tongue he’s stunted but lets her and starts to kiss her back they kiss for ages before breaking apart and staring into each other’s eyes when she stands up and starts to strip naked in front of him he quickly get the picture and starts doing the same. When there both naked she leaps onto him and starts to grind her dripping wet pussy against his now even large rock solid cock. He feels just how wet she is and looks at her and realises after all these years that he has extremely strong feeling for this girl and is happy by what is about to happen as she grind against him she shifts her hips and he shifts his and his cock slides in and hits her barrier she stops shocked and looks him straight in the eys and sweetly say three special words “I love you” the sinks down breaking her barrier on his engorged member and wimpers in pain as she settles with him all the way inside of her they stay like that till she starts to rock her hip causing both to moan with the pleasure all he can do is stair at her as she gets going he feels his balls tighten and almost screams “I’M CUMMING” Lisa start to cum and soaks him and the bed as she cums HARD this is all I takes to set Paul off and he shots 2 weeks’ worth of cum hurling straight into the depths of her pussy sending her of even more as they lay with him buried deep in her the fall asleep in the position.

This is just a my first story but if people are wanting more I will continue with this for a bit constructive criticism is much appreciated.
12 comments

Anonymous readerReport 

2014-07-28 09:19:26
If your're dyslexic and have such limited time you would probably be better off finding something more constructive to do with your time. When you have an excess amount of time then maybe...and that's a big maybe, you could give it another try. I am not noticing mistakes that are common to those afflicted with dyslexia either.

snedderReport 

2014-07-26 02:29:21
thanks for the pointers for those who gave them and il let the haters hate. btw at the moment im out the door at 4:30am and dont get back till 10ish i also the dyslexia doesnt help matters when it comes to writing stories but il just try my best and then see how well it goes from there

Anonymous readerReport 

2014-07-26 01:53:14
20:06:54 I couldn't have said it better, thanks for addressing those who wouldn't know good writing if they read it. So many people encourage people who just don't have any talent for writing. All that accomplishes is used up space, hard feelings, and everybody's time being wasted including the person trying to do the writing.

Anonymous readerReport 

2014-07-25 23:07:31
1st, you need paragraph breaks. They make the story much easier to read.
2nd, the story was too short. More build up as well as more description of the events would help a lot.
3rd, grammar, spelling and using the correct words all matter to educated readers. We don't want to have to sound out your writing to decipher what you are trying to say. It ruins the story.

Try to ignore the nastiness behind many of the comments while still paying attention to their complaint. And keep writing. I look forward to reading your next story.

Anonymous readerReport 

2014-07-25 20:06:54
ok a couple of things.

all those bitching about grammar errors. They are correct, although you did preface the story by saying that. however, a good spell checker is free to download, easy to use and will point those grammar and punctuation errors out for you. OR, you could hook up with someone on here that would be willing to proof read for you.

Not being ugly, I'd recommend you get someone else to proofread for you, because you probably won't recognize the errors when you see them, and if you do recognize them, probably won't know how to fix them (or you'd do so while writing)

I'm NOT going to say stop writing, but I will say if you're not going to bother getting some help, it just makes you look lazy as well as ignorant, and most readers here won't waste their time reading after the intro or first few paragraphs.
there are ALWAYS some who will say 'screw the whiners, keep writing'. those people typically get a boner just when they read the word fuck, pussy or cunt

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