I found a much better rewritten version of this story once online, and regretted erasing it from my computer. Here's the origanal written by someone else....I take no credit it for this, but thought many of you might like it. I only which I could get my hands on the rewritten copy so if anyone has it or knows where to get it, much apreasiated.
"Hey, sport," I looked down at Sandy, "I've got a hot and wet
"Sorry...I'm kind of new here...and the scenery is pretty
spectacular," I answered, kneeling between the girl's thighs and
reaching out to finger her cunt...probing inward for her hidden
vagina. "Well, sure enough...you do seem to have a hole for me to play
with," I bantered, thrusting a pair of fingers into the hot, tight,
"I sure do," she said reaching over her belly and grabbing my
long hard cock, "and it needs more than fingers inside it. Come
I was so turned on by this time that I suspected I'd come onto
her belly in a moment. Withdrawing my fingers from her wet channel, I
pulled her sparsely haired lips apart to expose the bright pinkness of
her inner slit and the ready vaginal entrance.
"Since you got him under control," I said, "why don't you stick
him inside where he can do some good." She grinned up at me and
positioned my prick so that the head was against her entrance...and I
shoved inward. "Ohhhhhh....gggoooddddd...." she gasped, her back
arching off the ground and her little tits quivered, her nipples stiff
and hard as pebbles. I felt her cunt muscles grab my penis like a pair
of tight fists.
"Too much...shall I stop?" I asked, concerned.
"If you stop... I'll... I'll... never forgive... you..." she
gasped, haltingly, "that's the biggest... biggest cock I've ever
had... and it feels... wonderfullllll! Fuck me!"
I could tell that she was coming almost from the first few
thrust, her vagina squeezing my prick as it slipped in and
out...milking me...teasing me as I did as she had asked. Her thin
pussy lips gripped my invading cock like a pair of face lips. I
reached out to toy with the rubberiness of her tiny tits.
"More hip thrusts, dear...put something into it for him," I
looked up to see a slender woman standing beside the lawn chairs. She
was stripped to the waist, her large, full breasts swaying seductively
as she unzipped her jeans and pulled them to her ankles.
"I know how to do this, mother," the girl beneath me gasped,
suddenly putting a lot more efforts into the hip thrusting and the
experience got even better for me! I looked up to watch my partner's
mother as the older woman skinned her panties down.
"Hi...I'm Helen," she said, "don't bother to stop."
"Hello," I said, a little unsure of myself. Here I was screwing
this incredibly pretty naked teenager while her beautiful nude mother
squatted within an arm's reach, "I'm Mindy's dad."
"Don't worry about Sandy," the man introduced as Andy said. I
glanced over to see the man coming toward us. He stopped and squatted
behind Helen. "She's in good hands, in a manner of speaking," he added
and I saw his hand appear under Helen's pussy as Andy slipped a finger
into the woman's vagina.
"I never could resist sophisticated smooth talker like you,"
Helen said, laughing as she swiveled and dropped to her hands and
knees. Her bare ass was more or less aimed at me and I had a great
view of her hairless snatch. She had a deep cleft, but the inner lips
were very long, extending outward like a pair of brownish-pink leaves
under her puckered anus. Andy moved in behind her, spread her cunt
lips to open the way to her gaping vagina...and stabbed himself inside
the woman's hole to the hilt. In seconds they were fucking hard
and hot and heavy.
"Hi, daddy," I heard and looked to my other side to find myself
staring at Mindy's hairless puss, "having fun?"
"Hi, honey," I gasped, the exertion getting to me as I pounded my
long prick into the tight wet sheath, "sure am...How about you?"
"Well, nothing's happened to me...yet," she giggled.
"That's about to change, sweetheart," there was a man behind
Mindy...I looked up to see that it was George. His long, slender cock
was hard and erect above heavy, hairy balls. "Want to play, Mindy?"
"Is it all right, daddy?" Mindy asked as she stared at my
gleaming shaft slipping in and out.
"It's fine with me...if you want to," I managed to say.
"OK," she murmured, and turned to face George. I could see up
between Mindy's legs, and saw that her entire slit was already
reddened by her finger play. She was clearly hot and ready to fuck.
"Let's play," she said, shyly. He grinned at her and dropped to
the grass, laying back and held his cock straight up.
"You should be on top at first," he advised her, "that way you
get to control how deep I might go and I won't be likely to hurt you
I was behind Mindy a little, still fucking, and watched my
daughter straddle George's hips. She squatted down till her cunt gash
met his prick, and then went a bit further till the bulbous head of
his cock spread her soft lips enough to half disappear. Mindy moved
slightly forward and backward a bit, rubbing his cock along the groove
of her genitals...and then stopped with his cock pressing against her
"Ready?" she asked George. her voice soft...but eager.
"Whenever you are, Mindy," he answered, stroking her sleek hips.
She grunted and pressed downward...and George's prick began to slip up
inside Mindy's belly. I felt mixed feelings...jealousy at seeing my
preteen daughter eagerly giving her naked body to another man's
thrusting prick...and pride at seeing her enthusiastic willingness to
help pleasure the man. I began pounding Sandy's hole faster...feeling
my climax nearing. Looking back at Mindy, I grinned to see her now
kneeling, George's cock entirely inside my little girl's body.
Glancing around, I saw a scene that would have been beyond my
wildest imagination a week ago. There I was fucking this little teeny
bopper, a few feet away a pair of handsome adults were screwing, my
daughter was humping a man I'd never met...and that was just the
beginning! Frank and Gretchen were still at in the chair, Allen was
kneeling behind another of the hairless little girls taking her doggy-
style, and Dave was on his back in the grass...one nude preteen
sitting on his cock while another squatted on his face. Eloise
straddled Tom's prick, humping him hard with her tits bouncing,
while a pair of little naked girls sat in the grass beside
them...offering their open cunts to Tom's thrusting fingers. The
tableau was completed by the sight of Gene kneeling on the patio...one
little titless naked girl lying between his legs and sucking his
dangling cock as she fingered herself...and he pressed his face into
the open cunt of another very young girl...the nine year old, I found
out later. Behind them on the patio were two other men who had just
come out of the house...one of them was fingering a girl while the
other was fucking a girl from behind as she leaned on the edge of a
"Yessss...yessss...oh, Christ...yesssssssss," I heard Helen wail
suddenly...climaxing as Andy pounded into her open gash.
"Ohhhh...shiiiitttt!" I heard Andy groan and darted a glance to
the left where they were humping. I had looked just in time to see him
jerk his pulsing prick from her tight twat...and gaped at the long
jets of thick whiteness that spurted from his prick to lace across
Helen's bare back.
An instant later I lost it, too...spurting long jets of liquid
heat up inside Sandy's tight sheath till I filled her to overflowing!
She was moaning, thrusting her hips at me and lost in her own
climax...that tight hole spasming against the intrusion of my rigid
When I was in control again, I rocked back to sit in the
grass...slipping my arms about the sweaty naked form of this loving
teenager and pulling her with me. We sat there, tightly embraced...my
cock still inside her vagina as we regained our composure. I looked
over Sandy's shoulder at Mindy, bouncing up and down the long thin
cock happily fucking George...and bringing him off. I could see his
heavy balls contract as he came...pumping Mindy full of his semen. She
had already come and was gleefully milking him. She finished and
breathlessly lifted herself...allowing his slippery cock to
glide out of her belly and fall back to his abdomen. I was still
looking into her exposed cunt from behind, and I saw what looked like
two tablespoons full or more of thick whiteness trickle thickly from
between Mindy's pussy lips as her vagina drained.
Sandy and I shyly, quietly separated and she went off to find
another temporary mate...as did I. I strolled across the lawn toward a
pretty blonde naked child sitting on a chaise lounge chair.
"Hi! Want to..." I began.
"Sure!" was her instantaneous response, as she scooted her little
butt off the chair. With no further urging, she was lying on her back
with her legs open. I stared down into her fuck reddened, semen
smeared slit...and knelt between those s lender thighs.
"Yeah...do it," was her answer...and I did!
When we were done...she having two or three orgasms and I coming
inside her...nude! Slender, small breasted and very pretty, she also
had her pubic hair removed and her prominent mons was cleft by a deep
slit and protruding inner lips.
"I'm Cindy's mother, Eloise," her hand was held out to me, so I
shook it...trying hard to not to notice here bare pussy. Do you like
"I'm not sure what you mean," I asked, playing dumb.
"Silly...I mean where we pee on each other," she laughed,
reaching over to give my cock a squeeze.
"Sure...shall I go first," I asked, "or do you really have to
"Me first," she said rising, "I'm about to pop...lay down."
I did as she asked, lying flat in the grass and looking up with a
little uncertainty as she stepped over me and straddled my belly.
White wetness thickly coated her uppermost thighs and her pussy lips
as my semen trickled from within her belly.
"Ready?" she giggled, slipping her fingers into her sticky gash
and spreading her lips.
"Ready!" I answered...and immediately a flattened stream of
bright yellow shot from deep inside her cunt cleft to spatter down
onto my hairy belly! Startled just a bit, I watched from a few seconds
as she played the jet across my cock and balls...and then I reached up
to slip my fingers into her slit. I felt her hot urine embrace my hand
and arm, flowing thickly and sensuously down to spill over my chest.
All too soon, she was empty and standing there giggling as she urged a
few short trickles from her now depleted bladder. My cock was stiff
again from the wild experience.
Before I could make other plans, she squatted and pressed her
vagina over the tip of my penis and I slid up inside her again.
"Now it's your turn...inside me," she said, breathlessly.
"I...I don't know if I can," I gasped, feeling the erection cut
off the ready escape of urine.
"Sure you can...just try," she urged...and I bore down, trying to
overcome the urge to retain my piss. Finally there was a short squirt
of heat from me that flooded her tight tunnel.
"Yeah...that's it," she squeaked, "more!" I concentrated...and
was rewarded with first a few thick squirts...and then a mighty flow!
"Yes....yes....yessssssss...! she enthused and I looked down
between her thighs to see my piss spurting and frothing from within
her as I emptied my over-taut bladder.
My flow depleted, I dropped back with my eyes closed...but just
for a moment! New hot piss splashed onto me and I looked up in
surprise to see another girl straddling my hips. The first girl was
leaning back and the second one had her belly pressed against the
chest on the one I still penetrated. The standing girl was now pissing
against the first child's chest. The yellow flow cascaded down the
girl's sleek body and spilled out onto mine.
Laughing when the flow stopped, the two girls scampered away,
leaving me exhausted, sweaty, sticky and urine soaked. What an
introduction to this new way of life, I thought as I cleaned myself
with the aid of a garden hose.
The daylight faded to dark, but the yard lights illuminated the
continuing orgy. Food and drink were produced...and I drank a lot of
non-alcoholic beer in order to quickly refill my bladder. I paced
myself...heeding the advice of one father when we were kneeling side
by side fucking a pair of kneeling girls. He told me that I didn't
need to come into a girl's body each time...just fuck her till I could
bring her off and then move to the next. If I didn't pace myself, I'd
be through and spent before the night was half gone! I slowly worked
my way through the girls and by the time it was nearly 10:30 I allowed
myself the luxury of coming again...into the overly slick lubricated
vagina of a pert little oriental child.