| 2016-01-30 13:02:34 | Camping with Mom_(0) | Better layout with this one.  Good work. | 
			
			| 2016-03-09 04:28:44 | Mom's Depraved Secrets 3 | Great stories ) though a little on the short side for my liking :/  great top marks though on the whole. | 
			
			| 2019-05-05 21:11:36 | My first time with a dog_(0) | Please excuse the Font errors where it changes from  real scene to dream scene and back.  I had originally had it in italics to show the differences, but when I attempted to put them on here the italics option was not working for me.  Eventually I will work to rectify this so that the contexts within the story and others I do are more clearer. | 
			
			| 2019-05-05 21:12:20 | My first time with a dog_(0) | All feedback is welcome as long as it is constructive and respectful |