| 2019-01-09 18:28:53 |
What a Difference a Summer Makes- Part 2
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I think you have spent too much attention and to this journey. The development of the relationship with Taylor is good and will have a part to play in how he handles his 'friends' when he gets back. This chapter should have finished with his actual arrival home. You're spinning it out too much. I look forward t part three but not with the same excitement I had been looking forward to part two. Good luck and best wishes. |
| 2017-11-17 18:28:59 |
PICTURES of LILY
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Everything about this story was beautiful. You closed it perfectly, but I for one would be delighted to see a sequel. |
| 2017-07-28 15:21:31 |
At the Cove, with Kit_(1)
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This was one of the finest stories I have read for a long time. Crafted brilliantly and dealing with a sensitive subject beautifully. Well done and thank you. |
| 2017-08-02 17:13:17 |
Never trust Aunt Angie part 1
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I reserve judgment until after part two. It depends, as craftyjoe comments, on just where it goes next. |
| 2017-09-16 05:45:34 |
Kim and Bryan
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A fun story, thank you. The ISLAY malts are, indeed, superb. I was pleased to see it being enjoyed correctly and not being destroyed by ice! Try the Ardbeg. |