| 2018-08-06 16:32:37 | My First Time With An Older Woman_(1) | Good story but you need to proof read BEFORE you post it... | 
			
			| 2018-08-06 21:01:59 | Haley's New Friend | Please proof read BEFORE you post... | 
			
			| 2018-08-21 00:50:31 | Truth or Dare_(8) | When my sister was 13 and I was 9 we started fucking... we continued until she passed away at 68... at no time did we ever use protection, she always said she loved me and if I knocked her up than so be it... never did! | 
			
			| 2018-09-04 22:24:56 | "My Halloween party at the Mortuary" | I had to stop reading the story... starting so many sentences with well actually go quite annoying... you mite consider a rewrite... | 
			
			| 2019-04-22 15:54:55 | Brother and Sister playing around | You need to get a proof reader... the story was good but the writing was very bad! |