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Date Story title Comment
2018-08-08 21:49:23 It started at the beach Great story, only spoiled because you don't break your sentences up, there-by making it very difficult to read.
If you google 'punctuation checker'. you will find a load of sites that will check your story for free, spelling, punctuation and grammar,
Give it a go.
2018-08-30 19:51:22 The Lesbian Debt- All Chapters A cleverly written story, the characters are well built, but I found myself getting bored about halfway through, so I didn't finish the story, I think it was probably better in separate chapters.
Still give it a five though.
2018-10-28 20:43:00 Kelly's Awakening - Part Four (final) A lovely series that got better along the way, the final part, whilst being predictable, was the best.
Well done.
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