Comments from Rhiannon57

Date Story title Comment
2011-12-14 09:44:37 My Sister In Law Beth - Conclusion Thank you so much for everyone who posted such positive comments about my story. For those who made suggestions on how I can improve, I thank you as well, and I will try to improve on the next piece. I am currently trying my hand at fiction although I must admit it's a lot more difficult to create a story than it is to recall one that happened. This was my first attempt and so many of you have been so extremely kind and generous with your feedback it has inspired me to try again. I just hope I can measure up to your expectations.
2012-04-04 14:08:29 A Game of Inches - Part 3 Thank all of you so much for the kind words and encouragement. I am working on parts four and five now. I should be able to post part four tomorrow. Again, thanks so much for the positive feedback. I do appreciate it, and I do follow your suggestions for the story, even though I have it worked out in my ehad, sometimes a reader's idea will get me to change the story a bit.
2012-04-11 08:14:03 A Game of Inches - Part Four Thank you all so much for the postive feedback left and the suggestions with the story. Although I did play football at a major college in my yonuger years, this story is entirely fictional. I always carefully gauge reader's suggestions and in some cases incorporate them into my story. Once again, thanks so much for the support.
2012-05-01 15:23:53 A Game of Inches - Part Five I do realize there were no real sexual experiences in this chapter, I promise the next will make up for it. Brian has alot going on in his lfe right now and I want to make sure I work the story line correctly. Once again, thank all of you so much for your support, I really enjoy writing these stories and it makes me feel really good that so many people enjoy them. Take care and stay safe my friends.
2012-05-30 10:03:58 A Game of Inches - Part Eight As always, I am so deeply grateful for all of the feedback and support I have received. I hope you like this Chapter, i am already working on the next. Thanks to all my friends, take care and be safe.