| 2012-09-06 18:13:38 | Apologetic Sex | I like your style and read your story because of it.  Please paragraphs need breathing room. | 
			
			| 2013-01-16 17:35:38 | My Friends and My Wife | I didn't even bother.  PARAGRAPHS!!!!! | 
			
			| 2013-01-16 18:06:44 | I Watched My Wife With An Older Man 3 | My wife of 10 years has been fucking her son by a previous marriage since the kid was a 15.   Her last husband was black and so is this kid.  He has more cock than me and can screw for a half hour solid so I just let her enjoy it.  As for me, I usually just watch the Disney Channel and daydream about a date with snow white. | 
			
			| 2013-09-21 00:23:29 | Falling in love with Uncle josh | Nice story but very hard to read due to the lack of PARAGRAPHS!! | 
			
			| 2013-11-11 16:55:17 | Geena and Me | you use finely when you mean finally |