| 2014-07-18 21:45:27 |
Barged Into Mom
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Very good! I especially like how you turned it into a revenge story at the end. Give us part 2! |
| 2014-06-13 00:57:49 |
Sis Comes Home for For Memorial Day A Year Later - Part 1
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Great series! Please don't keep us hanging too long. |
| 2014-09-12 19:59:04 |
She is the One (Part 16)
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Interesting... I sense that you're laying the groundwork for Ms. Cartwright to come on to Jack and we definitely want to see that happen. Two suggestions-- 1) When Tara arrives, have her stay at Kayla's house (with Mr./Mrs. Hannigan out of town). 2) Have Craig save Jack's ass the next time he gets in trouble. |
| 2014-10-23 16:37:57 |
Further News About 'She is the One'
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As of right now, there are 12 chapters still up on this site. |
| 2014-10-29 04:41:45 |
The Love Shared (Part 3)
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I like this series, but the nine-year old sister means that it's only a matter of time before it gets pulled off this site. Pity... |