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Date Story title Comment
2015-08-25 15:16:37 The Plumber's Daughter Chapter 3 Brilliant! To hell with the sex, "You know you are Italian" is sublime writing
2015-08-28 03:27:29 Sally-Ann's Rain Man Three anonymous bitches tried to blacken your reputation; three anonymous bitches are so jealous of what you do, write wonderful living stories; to hell with three anonymous bitches. Keep writing these beautiful living stories, and get them proof-read, those little omissions, those occasional missed words, they are the minute flaws that need to be eliminated. All you need now is perfection in presentation.
2017-07-25 09:15:53 Rehab for butt-boy_(1) So much repetition - Greg's story was repeated at least twice. And the stort was boring.
2017-07-25 09:28:55 The Other Side of the Family Gawd, more stroke-by-stroke delusional sex.
2017-07-25 09:38:50 Growing up_(7) Walls of prose, too hard to read; try spacing a line between paeragraphs, and reducing size of large blocks of prose.
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