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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-09-24 03:11:06 | My New Life_(3) | Spelling really does'nt make a bit of difference when this type of eros is the main course.If I have something that interests me,maybe I would write tempetuos tails for lovely ladies. perhaps MARQ |
| 2005-09-24 10:20:33 | My New Life_(3) | Remember to be consistent with your writing. You jump from first person to third person several times, sometimes two or three times within a sentence. Otherwise, see below. |
| 2005-09-25 03:48:43 | My New Life_(3) | From the tome of your writing you must have crossed thr Ambassador Bridge daily and gone to Wilber Wright High school. |
| 2005-09-25 15:39:37 | My New Life_(3) | The hell...?Quantum leap? |
| 2005-09-21 10:21:39 | The 'Special' Delivery | Your Story-line rated a 6, your descriptions a 7, but your terrible spelling and poor punctation brought the overall rating down to a 3 :( |