| 2005-09-23 03:37:55 |
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I read once a comic which had a identic story line |
| 2005-09-24 22:59:29 |
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I loved it! Gave it a ten also for sickness! Can't wait for the next one(hint hint) |
| 2005-09-26 11:07:48 |
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Did you actually read this before you posted it. It was more confusing then a mississippi choir trying to sing hindu. Just because you know where the " goes does not mean your dialogue is legible. Did she give her a muscle relaxer or a sedative? Either of which would have kept her from sprinting upstairs. A pringles can is less then 12" by 3". That is how she helps her lonely friend, by drugging her and raping her. Why would the 14 yo not be wearing panties? Crap, complete and utter confusing, illegible crap. I was having such a nice story day too. Dont quit your day job. |
| 2005-10-03 07:34:40 |
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U have stolen it from a comic story u r a thief 0/10 |
| 2006-01-02 21:03:15 |
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u need to check to see if u have the right words in places |