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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-03-19 21:11:26 | Thelma and Me (Summer of 65) part 2 | not to bad, |
| 2006-03-20 05:28:50 | Thelma and Me (Summer of 65) part 2 | Nicely done, even with the heavy English overtones and word peculiarities, such as "wank" and "knickers" and "arse," all of which is a bit strange for us here in the U.S. However, you did super well in the story-telling department. very sexy and hot. I am the dick slapper and I'll give it a 10/10. |
| 2006-03-20 06:43:46 | Thelma and Me (Summer of 65) part 2 | Thanks for that. As this is a quinticentially (!!) English story that's the type of language that I use. |
| 2006-03-25 21:14:03 | Thelma and Me (Summer of 65) part 2 | As an englishman who coincidently was born and bred in Chatham, Kent, it is nice to see a good story and based somewhere i know rather than place x, in the US. well played son 9/10 |
| 2006-04-07 05:01:12 | Thelma and Me (Summer of 65) part 2 | Personally I like it a lot. Very well told. I did read both parts, but I figure I'll just comment on both here. The only thing I didn't like was a very few very small grammatical errors. Like a missing letter here or there. But other than that, beautifull told. And really, "wank", "knickers" and "arse" are not weird, even here in the US. That guy is just a bit sheletered. Take care, and try to get some more stories like this in here will you? I liked it VERY much! 10/10 |