| 2007-02-03 05:09:40 |
mother wanted me
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learn to write properly and quit making up bullshit |
| 2007-02-07 19:30:15 |
mother wanted me
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"Get an editor or a friend to read your stories and clean them up. way to many errors in grammar and word usage to be enjoyable to read. the content seemed interesting and could make a nice story. keep writing and work to improve your command of english. good luck." Who ever wrote that is a dumbass, insulting his grammar but not being good at it yourself, way TOO many errors to read not way to many. Idiot.But yeah, the grammar in this story really did suck balls big time. |
| 2007-02-10 16:37:23 |
mother wanted me
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how could it be a long time coming if ur family wasn't open about sexuality. quit fuckin lying and learn grammar you fag |
| 2008-04-05 01:31:09 |
mother wanted me
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kantot |
| 2007-01-25 06:03:38 |
Stella & Margaret get soaked.
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Liked it. Not too young, and imaginable. |