| 2007-06-20 05:44:13 |
Past life-A mother and her daughters boyfriend
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yuiuyiuy |
| 2007-06-20 15:36:56 |
Past life-A mother and her daughters boyfriend
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stories of this type turn me on. fucking a family member or two under the nose of the rest of the family is a real turn on. |
| 2007-06-21 19:22:55 |
Past life-A mother and her daughters boyfriend
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The long time spint in the kitchen would make sence if you wrote A second story. You could show how the daughter had known of the mothers cheating. You could say she was destracting the father for her lover to renew his relations with her mother. Good story keep writing. 9/10 |
| 2007-07-04 01:30:19 |
Past life-A mother and her daughters boyfriend
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sucked |
| 2007-07-08 00:14:52 |
Past life-A mother and her daughters boyfriend
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Don't let idiots sway your writing. I thought it was very intertaining. A 9 and a half. Keep the story going. There are a lot of directions this can be taken. |