| 2004-07-08 08:02:34 |
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Lacking description. And far too short. :P Only worth a 3 because at least you used proper grammar.. |
| 2004-07-08 08:06:29 |
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Story has a great start but there is to little there. I would seem more like a outline. Perhaps if you went more into detail about the little details. How she stripped, How she was positoned and so on. |
| 2004-07-08 18:16:39 |
My hot neighbor_(2)
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I loved this story personally. Besides if you noticed there is a Part 2 so maybe this was just a setup for the second. I certianly hope that number 2 goes into more detail |
| 2004-07-09 16:36:17 |
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good start, cant wait for the second part |
| 2004-07-09 20:37:45 |
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hey if ne yall female and want to cyber the name i posted is my aim screen name so im me.... |