| 2015-08-13 21:15:43 |
William and Ann Chapter 1
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This is quite good so far, looking forward to reading the rest! |
| 2015-08-13 20:45:30 |
The Hot Tub Blues
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11/10 one boner up! Loved it, very well written, very sweet, and very erotic. Just wish it was longer ^_^ |
| 2015-08-13 20:08:06 |
Eileen
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Very well written. Plenty of detail on the sexy time, but for readers like me who enjoy a good buildup in story that leads to the sexy time, a little more detail in story buildup couldn't hurt. Otherwise, I enjoyed it ^_^ |