| 2015-09-15 04:54:48 |
Christie's tale or The third leg of the triangle pt.2
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Dam great story line you know how to write A story that everyone should at least for sure like your detailing and storytelling are amazing it has kept me interested in this whole series. |
| 2015-09-11 21:41:34 |
Divine Justice: Conner Evans' vengeance
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This is kind of confusing what happens between this time & beginning when he is A foster kid & virgin again along with making it to where he has just met the devil in beginning there has to be something telling the part left out. |
| 2015-09-11 22:09:42 |
Divine Justice: Conner's completion
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These were all good stories but the problem is the confusion of it all for a first time though it is a bit of a easy mistake to make it would be nice to see the series redone to where everyone understands it all & also continue the series. |
| 2015-09-13 21:23:33 |
Chris and Christie
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This was A great story very good. |
| 2015-09-14 02:58:46 |
The unwitting third wheel or Hailey's story
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Great story perfectly written it really makes you think about these things & if they were to happen to you. |