| 2016-05-05 04:28:57 |
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hi! Thanks for the feedback, the foreplay is the more interesting aspect for me but I can understand how readers would like to have more of the sex. Will work on a part 2 if i feel compelled. |
| 2016-05-05 12:11:34 |
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Thanks anon readers! I'll take these comments as a compliment. Always a pleasure to express myself freely. |
| 2016-05-06 03:26:30 |
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Noted Big Dave, will keep the details in mind though honestly, that is what i'm interested in. Thanks anyway for the feedback! |
| 2016-05-07 04:14:02 |
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haha thank you guys for the support and suggestions. I have another story pending approval, hope you love that one! Not sure if there's a part 2 but i'll consider! |
| 2016-05-10 03:15:21 |
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Thanks so much somethingnasty, this is my first full story and its very divided, those who love it really do hahah thanks again for your objectivity! |