| 2018-02-09 17:53:03 |
Vera...Jane and Susan
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Very nice story loved the description of the pointy tip entering her cervix for the first time brought back some sweet memorys |
| 2018-02-09 18:28:14 |
THE TEST SUBJECT
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This could be a very good story but you seem to have let it die love the description of the Dog , a friend has a Mastiff short leg Rottie cross. that looks like your master and is one of the hardest k9 lovers I have ever had |
| 2018-02-09 18:37:49 |
Samantha goes from innocent high school girl to movie star
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Nice surprised you dont have more comments great story |
| 2018-02-09 19:06:23 |
“G.T.” Tracey the “P.T.” get’s Gang-Banged – Day One
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Take no notice of those anonymous Pricks , everybody has to start somewhere your writing skills will improve, You have the one prerequisite imagination, I liked your story personally I am not into piss shit and blood , and if your going to write about dog sex you need to know a little about it. |
| 2018-02-09 19:30:34 |
Buffy (longish)
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a very old story that needs to finish |