| 2018-07-05 08:42:01 |
Reunion Ch. 4
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Good writing Firebolt. Keep up the good work |
| 2018-07-05 10:52:46 |
Reunion Ch. 5_(1)
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I like direction the story is going, haven't seen any plot malfunctions. Good work, great story |
| 2018-07-09 06:38:45 |
Lindsey: An unlikely Romance.
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Very good start, great development potential. Please continue |
| 2018-07-09 06:46:53 |
Lindsey: An unlikely Romance patr 2
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This is good, almost like foreplay. Please keep up the good work and don't rush it, just let it develop |
| 2018-07-09 07:45:35 |
Lindsey: An unlikely Romance. Part 4
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Love in denial. Reminds me of Celine Dion's story, young girl falls in love with older man due to the love care and affection shown |