| 2019-01-26 02:59:21 |
Potential Part 26
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With each chapter the stories get better and better. I see I am not the only one who appreciates the talent you demonstrate with each chapter. You are the best on this site. However there two other STARS on this site that I am impressed with, both share my opinion regards your talent. DBuck and Pablo Diablo. In this chapter you proved you can really create a page turning plot/story line, because you create action on the race track that has us glued to our chair anxiously waiting to see what happens next. It is like reading a thriller. The story should be a TV drama. |
| 2019-01-26 03:05:30 |
Potential Part 26
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I said previously you create a thriller. With this chapter and the deion of the action on the track you have written a SUSPENSE THRILLER with hardly any nasty sex scenes. I don’t know how much longer you can drag this story out, you certainly have a lot of people hooked, including ME! Keep them coming and we will keep reading and loving the characters who are so real to us. |
| 2019-01-27 01:08:11 |
The Chauffeur(#1)......the Interview
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Ah, Señor Diablo. Me encanta su nom de plum. I love your pen name. Very original. This story is very different from what I expected. You are one of a very few truly gifted and talented authors on this site. I find the story line intriguing. I can’t wait to see where you take us with this tale. I notice your copyright. I encourage all good authors to do so. Though I do not post at this site I do at other free and some pay sites. I copyright everything even the crap I occasionally scribble. Congratulations on a excellent piece. |
| 2019-01-27 02:22:02 |
The Chauffeur(#2)......First Day/At the Office
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Señor Pablo, you are one of the best writers on this site. You have crafted a interesting plot. If I may so bold to make a suggestion, please take a breather from the nonstop gratuitous sex and develop the story line a little more. I am sure that the majority of the readers here are interested in a story that titilates the libido and seek a word picture that facilitates a quick ejaculation. There are some, me included who do enjoy the sex, but also enjoy a little drama to accompany the vivid sexual acts. |
| 2019-01-27 02:22:07 |
The Chauffeur(#2)......First Day/At the Office
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Señor Pablo, you are one of the best writers on this site. You have crafted a interesting plot. If I may so bold to make a suggestion, please take a breather from the nonstop gratuitous sex and develop the story line a little more. I am sure that the majority of the readers here are interested in a story that titilates the libido and seek a word picture that facilitates a quick ejaculation. There are some, me included who do enjoy the sex, but also enjoy a little drama to accompany the vivid sexual acts. |