| 2022-07-15 22:26:17 |
What Do You Say to a Naked Niece
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At last, someone who can actually write, spell, punctuate, and use paragraphs! A refreshing change that makes the stories much more enjoyable. |
| 2024-02-07 11:35:59 |
Young Fern Part Five_(1)
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I like your stories but you need an editor to correct the many spelling errors and homophones. I’d be happy to do that for you. |
| 2024-02-07 12:56:27 |
Young Fern part seven
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I disagree with Dudley, there are far too many grammatical issues, spelling errors, and homophones, plus capitalisation of words that shouldn’t be capitalised. There’s a bit of a hodgepodge of American and Australian terms. I see you are in Australia but you seem to be writing for American readers. |
| 2024-05-11 05:44:30 |
Shelly's Secret Chapter 1
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Aah, it’s good to read something by someone who can string words together in a readable fashion and who can spell and punctuate. Not only that, I liked the story and the other sections. I must admit to stroking myself whilst reading - and wishing I was Greg or my sister was Shelly. |
| 2024-05-12 12:16:59 |
My Daddy Says
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If anonymous reads doll1’s other stories he will know why the username is female. I liked it, Greg, but would like more chapters. |