| 2022-08-07 14:52:32 |
Tim, Mary and Me!
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Thanks @Cumthirstymwm your feedback is appreciated. |
| 2022-08-07 21:10:19 |
Well, we did it again! Part 5
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Could someone please comment on why they didn't like this story? It's getting killed in the ratings and I don't know why. TIA |
| 2025-01-24 19:13:32 |
Possessing The Girl Next Door
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It is a good story, I especially liked Jordan joining in. If you ever rewrite this story, consider a double ended dildo to finish both girls off. |
| 2025-02-15 01:37:47 |
Drugged And Kidnapped
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You write very well. I enjoyed reading your story. Good flow, nice twist at the end, almost perfect. Only one critique, when I've been fortunate enough to have prostate organism, they have been a slow leaking affair that last for as long as the stimulation is present. Perhaps yours have been different |
| 2025-02-15 17:45:24 |
Fred, Tim and I
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@rodrider, thank you for taking the time to leave a comment. I wish more readers would leave comments, negative or positive, it helps us budding writers improve our stories. |