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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2026-03-04 22:04:27 | Mars - Mission Comes First pt 1 | Hi Scihorn. I enjoyed your story, the writing is better than most of what I see here. Don't sweat it if you don't wind up with a really good rating - there are readers who just want the sex parts and will think you spend to much time on other things. My one suggestion would be more emotion from Angelique- maybe the plot of this installment didn't allow for that. Keep writing |
| 2026-06-15 22:42:16 | Trading Places With My Cousin | Wow, really good story. The sex was arousing and nicely done, got me wet. I suggest re-reading the first few paragraphs, they seem stiff, and let the reader know earlier the narrator is male. I will check out your other things, I appreciate another writer who puts in the effort you must have. |