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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2017-12-05 19:39:19 | A guy and his...? 62 Love Magic | Coming down to the wire, we have Forced Love versus True Love. Which will be triumphant? I tend to side with naenaegirl on this one. However, as I recall, about 25 chapters ago, I predicted the end of the story was near. This is, after all, the creation of the twisted mind of Pars001. ANYTHING can happen at this point. Zahra could be faking it, as the True Love she experienced grows within her to overcome the evil. Marie could go into a Sugar Coma from eating too many doughnuts. Tankena could hug his brother. Who knows? Pars does, and he's not telling... At least, not until next time.... |
| 2017-12-10 02:29:08 | A Guy and His...? 63 Tilda | 63 chapters... Will this saga never end???? The Deadly Trio hot for Master Jake, worked up to a sexual fever pitch, then not allowed to orgasm... Zahra again balked by Master Jake's Jinns, and burnt very badly... Marie pissed that another scheme didn't quite work... Another half-human, half-Jinn baby born and given a Jinn name.... It seems that much is continuing, and yet more new things are being foreshadowed. Seems to me like I'm going to have to keep an eye on all this and see what happens.... |
| 2017-12-10 02:29:40 | A Guy and His...? 63 Tilda | 63 chapters... Will this saga never end???? The Deadly Trio hot for Master Jake, worked up to a sexual fever pitch, then not allowed to orgasm... Zahra again balked by Master Jake's Jinns, and burnt very badly... Marie pissed that another scheme didn't quite work... Another half-human, half-Jinn baby born and given a Jinn name.... It seems that much is continuing, and yet more new things are being foreshadowed. Seems to me like I'm going to have to keep an eye on all this and see what happens.... |
| 2018-05-28 10:50:28 | THE GIFT_(5) | Per your request, my main reason for the Negative rating was your spacing. It wasn't always clear where his thoughts ended and the next person's thoughts began. An extra line between paragraphs would help flow tremendously. Otherwise, it's a good first effort. |
| 2018-06-14 01:30:25 | A Guy and His...? 67 An end is near | Evil Zahra is losing ground to Good Zahra and finding out what real love is like. SOMEONE is being turned into a full Jinn. Master Jake? He's certainly deserving... His friend, Tommy? We haven't seen him in a while; could be that he feels the need of a male friend on his side. Someone else? Perhaps... but if so, then who? Maybe another player we haven't yet met.... Still, it could be Master Jake, but instead of keeping the power, he may have been feeding it to Zahra's Good side. What's REALLY happening? Stay tuned for the next exciting chapter.... |