| 2011-09-10 05:34:11 |
My game at the game
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I agree. I think you really write well. |
| 2011-09-11 02:19:14 |
The Adventure of Julie Grey - Schoolteacher
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Gave a negative rating because you stopped your story right in the middle of a hot sex scene. Quit playing games and finish what you start. |
| 2011-11-24 02:21:49 |
Vacations over moms blackmailed
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Very annoying to read with so many grammatical and spelling errors. |
| 2011-11-25 13:54:58 |
How I Got Back In TheGame
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I hope there's more coming. You are a very good writer. Keep the story going, even if you have to fictionalize the rest of it, because there's a lot of potential here. |
| 2011-11-25 14:23:22 |
Crazy Mom and Aunt Redone
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Why didn't you bother to correct your spelling and grammar mistakes as long as you were taking the time to rewrite it? It's very distracting to read a story with so many errors in it. |