| 2018-11-05 20:12:44 | My little sister_(0) | Way to quick. | 
			
			| 2018-11-06 21:36:33 | Twin Touches | Too short.  Need to continue this story. | 
			
			| 2019-02-16 16:55:44 | L.I.S.S.A.  C | So did you mean “Desert” - a dry arid expanse of land?  What would a desert have to do with someone setting naked with their legs wide open? | 
			
			| 2019-05-07 23:02:26 | My little sister Lily, Chapter 3: Life with Danny | You were doing fine until this part when you fucked it up with the multiple partners bullshit.  I’m out of here and didn’t even finish the chapter. | 
			
			| 2019-05-25 15:57:19 | Camping With My Little Brother | Seriously?  You need to learn punctuation, and rules of capitalization.  I learned that stuff back in the forth grade. |