| 2012-02-18 13:45:38 |
Milk of Desire, Chapter 4 : The truth starts to add up.
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Ok, got it sorted. 5 upcomming, followed by 6 soon. |
| 2012-02-18 18:05:35 |
Milk of Desire, Chapter 5 : Setting up for a sleepover
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I know this one was a little short, but this is where it had to end or it would go forever since the next one will be quite long it looks. |
| 2012-02-18 18:21:48 |
Milk of Desire, Chapter 5 : Setting up for a sleepover
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I know this one was a little short, but this is where it had to end or it would go forever since the next one will be quite long it looks. |
| 2014-09-06 00:02:54 |
A Not-So-Simple Life: Part 4_(0)
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Speaking as a writer sometimes you just write yourself into a corner. The start of a good story is easy, but the ending is often unsatisfying given all the work that went into it. |
| 2012-03-06 07:29:18 |
friends sister's panties
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Nice idea, but poor execution. Some grammar errors "He left my dick inside of her"?, but mostly it all happened too quick and sounded more like a locker-room brag than an actual story. Flesh it out and make us feel like we are really there. Gonna give a positive since it's your first story, but needs work. |