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Comments from cant.help.being.horny
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2011-06-21 20:40:34 | I can't just say 'SIster you're fucking me' | i did explain i didn't write this for this means, it was actually in pieces in an msn conversation pieces together, i tried to fix it up and i probably could have if i had made more of an effort. I spent about 20 minutes max on this and if this goes well then obviously i might make it a hobby and actually try with the story. i know i've never read porn and thought about the grammer and spelling mistakes. My friend, didnt get to read the full story, he got what he needed after the 1st half but i'll get this to him asap. i know. it was formatted better before i copied n paster it, like there was blank lines between paragraphs n stuff, i'm not used to writing, not wrote since i was at college last year thanks for your comments, i take your critisim but would more like to hear your views on the story than the grammer, spelling, format etc. sure add it in but at least mention the story i do aplogise grammer nazis :) |
| 2011-06-22 09:52:22 | I can't just say 'SIster you're fucking me' | god, i will i will, paragraphs, spacing, spell check etc. i'll get there! i was just bored and wrote a wee something. Nothing major. AND i hate to disagree but i know many many guys that can and have went all night ;) and cum far more than 10 times, think my record is a guy who came 27 times in 24 hours. yeah some guys can. you might just be unlucky..... |
| 2011-06-22 13:03:20 | Being at a gas station CAN be fun | i aint no grammer nazi so i aint goin to point out what every1 always does (it bugs me 2 when people do it!) anyway my opnion, story just didn't do anything for me, didn't seem very realistic and more like something a teenage boy would think of with an over active imagination. good effort just not my thing :) |
| 2011-06-22 13:03:45 | Being at a gas station CAN be fun | i aint no grammer nazi so i aint goin to point out what every1 always does (it bugs me 2 when people do it!) anyway my opnion, story just didn't do anything for me, didn't seem very realistic and more like something a teenage boy would think of with an over active imagination. good effort just not my thing :) |
| 2011-06-22 13:29:21 | A Night With My Younger Step Sister | ignore the grammer nazi's :P any1 with a brain can realise the 15/16 was a typo within 0.2 seconds.... great story, loved it. well done :) |