| 2011-02-27 20:20:29 |
home alone well not quite (proper version) part 1
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Good story! All you need to do now is keep it going! |
| 2011-04-06 20:10:54 |
love between siblings
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Great writing style! You seem to know what'snecessary and what's not with it - for example, you had the build up leading to the sex scene - you wanted Becky to have the confidence in making love to Jack whilst being assured that he wasn't just using her. Such a great effort! 10/10 (dare I mention it lol!) :) |
| 2011-04-06 20:39:02 |
love between siblings: part 3
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This story is perfect - the love, passion and relationship are all in perfect synchronization :) |
| 2011-04-06 20:40:00 |
love between siblings: part 3
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This story is perfect - the love, passion and relationship are all in perfect synchronization :) |
| 2011-03-29 19:00:44 |
A DINNER WE WONT FORGET
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That really turned me on... such a great story! |