| 2012-03-06 02:37:02 |
Stephen Learns
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An excellent tale of young lads discovering what their penises can do. Realistic, with good writing and excellent descriptions. |
| 2012-03-06 06:38:09 |
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That last comment was me. Damned thing logged out |
| 2012-03-06 10:16:38 |
My daddy's little slut
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Hi, I think it was ok, but could have done with more detail, and would have been better if longer. I gave you a positive rating, nonetheless |
| 2012-03-06 10:21:29 |
I wanted her... She wanted me...
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More detail on the characters and their bodies would help a lot. Also, break the paragraphs up a bit. That will make it easier to read. Sexy, though. All the best. |
| 2012-03-08 05:04:35 |
Eileen
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Well written and really horny. I hope there's more to come. |