| 2014-05-22 22:21:47 |
Boy in the grass 60
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I was trying to say votes, volts. |
| 2014-05-22 21:39:20 |
Boy in the grass 60
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You are one of the most gifted writers on this site. The way you pull at a persons heart strings. Love, romance, sex, action, violence, and . . . . .THOSE DAMN CLIFFHANGERS!!!!!!!!!! Aaaahhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!! I'll be pulling my hair out waiting to find out what happens next. I am going to be bald by Monday. You sick, sadist. Injoy the weekend. You earned it. |
| 2015-09-01 01:25:27 |
Genesis Volume 6
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Your Back!!!!!!. Thank you! I been missing reading your work. Please write more. Glad your still writing, had me worried for a bit there. Thought you might have quit. |
| 2013-12-27 12:57:28 |
My Beautiful Brianna 3
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I have to agree. Your writing and story telling is wonderful. I was happy just to see part 2. Part 3 so soon was a pleasant surprise. Please post part 4 as soon as you can. I can't wait to read it. |
| 2013-12-29 05:19:00 |
My Beautiful Brianna 5.
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For the most part you have done a terrific job with this story. Problem is you gave the lovers a soulmate bond so strong that they both felt it the first time they seen each other. Then he saves her life. Her wanting a threesome doesn't fit her as you have written her. Whit this story, monogamy good,threesome bad. You are a great writer and I look forward to the next chapter but please keep in mind the personalitys involved as you have written them. It is too big a swing in her to be believable. |