2013-11-24 21:03:14 |
April_(1)
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Awesome cheating story! The lead-up to the sex was well done. The sex was super great! |
2013-11-25 23:09:20 |
A mother in law Dilemma Part One
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Entertaining and full of fire (I'm talking about the non-sex parts!). Great dialogue and storytelling. Excellent writing and sentence and paragraph construction. When it comes to the sex, I'm jizzing already and your writing explodes! Good work! |
2013-11-25 23:09:41 |
Barb-a-que2
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Well-written and sexy........ ....... ....... |
2013-11-26 17:39:54 |
My Sister In Law, The Unexpected Cum Slut
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Wonderful descriptions, brilliant sex, titillating dialogue. An awesome tale of cheating and reception of ejaculation. I wish a hot woman could ride me in my sleep. Jenny's obsession with cum is the center point of this text and it is intriguing and so very hot! Thanks a lot, pdosu. Loved this one! |
2013-11-26 17:40:27 |
Family gathering_(0)
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Very good writing. The family get-together was described perfectly and helped to create a setting for delicious "misbehavior". Great serial fucking. Healthy imagination at work here. |