| 2013-10-10 04:52:23 |
Careful What You Wish For_(1)
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Thanks..I'll keep that in mind. |
| 2013-10-13 03:22:37 |
She had to do it
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I wasn't aware of my good instincts, thanks. I will be grateful if you tell me where I went wrong. |
| 2013-10-13 11:42:34 |
She had to do it
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I am pleased that someone got off reading this, gives me the spirits to write the second part. |
| 2013-10-14 08:16:37 |
She had to do it
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In my own opinion, I think that grammar to some extent defines a story. I think that is why I fell bottle-necked by my grammar, which I am trying to improve. Anyway, I am writing the second part and I am truly appreciative of your corrections and comments. |