| 2015-04-14 16:24:19 |
Andy and Becky
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I enjoyed this but felt it was a little rushed and it seemed more stilted than your usual work, it was romantic and you had everthing in there but I would have liked more embellishment, thats just my personal preference , but I still love your writing, I just prefer you other material. Thanks for the work though. Still a positive vote. Thanks Luvsalik xx |
| 2015-04-14 16:28:14 |
Andy and Becky
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Please come back and write more please, we need more of your work. Thanks Luvsalik xx |
| 2015-04-14 21:00:12 |
Riding the Storm Out - Part I
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Thanks for the post, I really wanted to love it, but I only liked it. It wasn't detailed enough for me it was quite superficial, I thought it was going to be a great romantic sexual tale but it didnt live up to the great begnning you penned, sorry. Just my opinion , still gave it positive vote though, as there were good points. Thanks Luvsalik xx |
| 2015-04-14 22:05:59 |
Keri Gets Help with her Homework, and Alex Gets a Little Fuck Toy
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Not a bad premise but why have him say he would be gentle then be the exact opposite, notsure about this , but I will read on just to be sure! Thanks for the post . Luvsalik xx |
| 2015-04-14 22:17:18 |
Keri Gets Help with her Homework, and Alex Gets a Little Fuck Toy (Part 2) Fiction/Non-Consensual Sex
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I am feeling very uneasy about this, is anyone else ? Very foreboding chapter now I will definitely have to read on, damn you Uncle Danny, sneaky very sneaky , lol . Thanks for the post. Luvsalik xx |