| 2013-10-27 17:18:18 |
My Grandmother Teaches Me About"Life" Ch. 03
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yeah better..but you finished too quickly..two paragraphs and it was all over..big finish doesnt mean quick finish..give us more details..but keep writing, you are good |
| 2013-10-28 16:48:43 |
Thursday Night Football
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very good..more please..10/10 |
| 2013-11-02 19:53:44 |
A Trampoline Fuck With My Hot Cousin Erica
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shit !!..stay near her Kevin..she's a hottie..and fuck being cousins..that sucks anyway..and dont take any notice to these queer cunts that fuck women in the shit shute,,they are just fucked in the head.. |
| 2013-11-02 20:07:01 |
Rape of Nanking: Japanese Soldiers Story (Unedited)
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thank god the yanks bombed the crap out of your fucked up country..they should do it every 50 years..just to remind you and that fucked up country how shit faced you all are |
| 2013-11-08 14:50:17 |
The Shed Club (part 6)
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yes..full marks again..a great little story..I hope you continue writing..methinks your biography would read well..10/10 |